I Am Who I Am (Accept It)

[Vengeance]

all ive done is wright down my feelings.
this is not completed yet

Verse 1

I sit here and think to myself,
im becoming more like you, (yes i do)
all you do all day is stack shelves,
and have no time for me, thats just you,
but when it comes to your free time,
you always have your PC or friends stuck in your mind,
dont get it twisted, dont get it mis-understood,
im not saying you cant have friends, or not go to the pub,
i just wish you'd realise that im close to drawing blood,
coz u always make me feel unwanted and unloved,
u never txt or ring me, its the other way round,
but you txt louise, and u say ur just good mates,
but to me sounds like new love.

Chorus

I am who i am (you gotta accept it)
if you dont like it then leave (before i do some sick shit)
then you can free away from me, (let someone else suck your dick)
I am who i am and thats the way i choose to be, (you gotta accept it)



ok im not finished with this yet i'll edit it or post the full song when im finished later

[DOPE]

i like it man is good

this line"dont get it twisted, dont get it mis-understood"

if you rap it the way im reading it maybe you will it gon be sick shit

like this "dont get-it-twist-ed, dont get-it-mis-understood"

[Inzanity]

that was hot nice work on that

[katastrophe]

nice job...i like it

[FTW]

nice work

[Vettori]

K I like ur Strength for putting this kinda stuff up, But i'm gonna tell you one thing, When you say im close to drawing blood, Like that sounds liek an "Emo" comment, like no one should be thinking about suicide or harming themselves, I see it as a way to Get attention and it seems to work well, But I just think it's the dumbest thing in the world to do, I had a girlfriend like that, Try to guess why i left her, Not to be a bad person, But like think u wanna end ur life over another person ?, That shit aint worth it,
There are people who have died Wishing they could still have lived, and ur in a hurry to end urs, Think about it, The world don't revolve around you, But then again u do have to live ur life, so enjoy it, sorry to get into details but it's just emo's and cutting wrists and shit, I find it a cheap excuse for attention

Respect for the poem/song

[Vengeance]

nah its not usual that i write it in my poems but half the time i do wanna commit suicide and i dont just say it for attention..i dont say it unless i mean it....but thanks for the feedback and appreciate it thanks