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Re: Vietnam

Postby Slim Fiasco » Mar 7th, '13, 19:47

PAINKILLƎR wrote:I read this when it got momentarily leaked, and like I said I loved it. Rhyming was good, flow was good, and it painted a vivid picture in my head. Also love the direction you took it in. Great verse Slim.


Thanks bro, that's much appreciated!!

Geno wrote:Although it's a tourney verse, it should still have a link of feed if you post it in here.


Gotcha man, just give me time till tomorrow, I'll feed couple of pieces :b:
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Re: Vietnam

Postby CanadaPure » Mar 8th, '13, 00:02

I'm really glad you posted this up for us to see Slim, I really like it man!
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Re: Vietnam

Postby Slim Fiasco » Mar 8th, '13, 09:45

CanadaPure wrote:I'm really glad you posted this up for us to see Slim, I really like it man!


Thanks man, I'm glad you liked it! :b: :b:
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Re: Vietnam

Postby Evil Twin » Mar 8th, '13, 14:24

Was a good read. Really liked that verse bro (y)
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We're gonna rock this house until we knock it down
So turn the volume loud, cause it's mayhem 'til the a.m.
So baby make just like K-Fed and let yourself go, let yourself go
Say fuck it before we kick the bucket
Life's too short to not go for broke

Go Berzerk!
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Re: Vietnam

Postby Slim Fiasco » Mar 8th, '13, 16:11

Shady's Apocalypse wrote:Was a good read. Really liked that verse bro (y)


I appreciate it homes :y:
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