Eedee ft. Geno - People Change

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Beat is alright, not my type but i think you guys did pretty well with it.
Geno - Sounding good man, i think this is the first song i've heard you on i honestly didn't know you rapped, You're definitely coming along, i think you need to work on your delivery a bit in the sense that you sound like you're reading off of a piece of paper. In terms of lyrics and rhyme scheme structure of multies; your verse was really good. flow was descent but a bit basic but otherwise good verse man i hope to hear more shit.
Eedee - obviously you've been atleast recording for longer it shows in your delivery and flow. Your lyrics and flow are really good in this i just feel like you could have had more multies tossed in there. I understand that this type of song there is more importance in the lyrics and your story rather than rhyming but it keeps the listeners entertained waiting for the next switchup. Overall great job guys i'm impressed, and keep it up! i hope to hear more from both of you

Edit - I'm gonna go ahead and edit this, i was pretty fucking tired when i did this, the first half was referring to you Geno, and the second half to Eedee. For some reason i wrote sypder instead of Eedee when i started on his part of the feed, i guess i zoned out for a second lol.. good shit though my bad about the mix up

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My bad about that ahha, i hope to hear more shit from ya tho man keep it up

[Eedee]

Thanks 313. I focused on the message but still, every line has a multi-syllable rhyme and internals and whatnot. I don't think rhyming is a problem on this track, tbh.

[JamaicanPattlez]

Really liked this! I loved Geno's verse, and I loved Eedee's delivery. Man, for some reason Eedee I thought you'd sound like a typical gruffly rapper. No idea why, lmao, so I was pleasantly surprised. Very nice. And, I like the mixing on it as well. Very clean. I wanna see more from both of you. Keep it up!

[Eedee]

Really liked this! I loved Geno's verse, and I loved Eedee's delivery. Man, for some reason Eedee I thought you'd sound like a typical gruffly rapper. No idea why, lmao, so I was pleasantly surprised. Very nice. And, I like the mixing on it as well. Very clean. I wanna see more from both of you. Keep it up!

Gruffly. Now that's a word I haven't heard in a while!

Glad you enjoyed it and glad I don't sound like your typical rapper.

[JamaicanPattlez]

Thanks JP! Nice to see you posting again.

No problem man! Haha I've been working on delivery myself... rappers make it look so easy.

Really liked this! I loved Geno's verse, and I loved Eedee's delivery. Man, for some reason Eedee I thought you'd sound like a typical gruffly rapper. No idea why, lmao, so I was pleasantly surprised. Very nice. And, I like the mixing on it as well. Very clean. I wanna see more from both of you. Keep it up!

Gruffly. Now that's a word I haven't heard in a while!

Glad you enjoyed it and glad I don't sound like your typical rapper.

Hah yeah, definitely. You've got a delivery that I could definitely see appealing to a lot of people, both of y'all.

[Jaz]

Liked both of the verses, maybe the first just slightly better. Quality wasn't great, but it wasn't that bad so I'm not sure why you're so worried about that :P It doesn't prevent my ability to listen to it, so that's good. I also like this beat/sample, sounds good. The beat may have been a bit mellow for the enthusiasm in the second verse.

Check out my Funk Volume contest entry at viewtopic.php?f=38&t=155261 if you guys get a chance - I promise it won't disappoint.

[Eedee]

Thanks for the feed.

[FxTDilz]

This is my bro Eedee haha, will release my song with him on my mixtape so stay tuned :P

[Ticalrecords]

this was a good song. the only thing i can say to work on, is Eedee, your delivery has definetely gotten a lot better from when you first started, but it still seems a lil "strained", for lack of a better word. i'm not saying "forced", theres a difference, although its hard to explain.
Geno, haven't heard any of your other stuff, but i was impressed. cool stuff guys, yall make a good team for sure.

[tadpole25]

good job guys. i like it.

this kind of inspires me want to make an audio song of my own lol

[Trimss]

There's only one thing I didn't like, was the fact that it sounds like a typical Youtube netcee instrumental. I liked your verse Geno, though I felt like you were stressed or something, your voice was shaking when you rapped "by being mad"

Eedee, that's some good work. I liked this verse. Isn't Geno's verse louder though? It seems so. The content is great.

[Eedee]

Well shit. Geno, remind me to work with you again so people actually feed my songs hahahaha

Thanks guys. And Trimss, yes. Yes it is your typical netcee instrumental... Oh well. I'll be using custom beats from now on anyway on my debut studio album, so yeah. :3 And Geno's vocals are louder because of the compression I used. This volume was the only volume that made it sound listenable.