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Soon to be a song(not done)

Postby Vettori » Jun 26th, '06, 21:16

I was really startin to think about life in general so I put it in words the way i see it, I know the concept of the third verse, And ima write about that later, Enjoy


If I conceal my thoughts the ones deeper then you hear
Not the ones from my music, the ones that youd fear
The ones that are crazy and shouldnt be stirred
The kind that doctors would try to kill me if they heard


(I'm Not Crazy)

(Verse 1)
Altho I might be a little un stable
This is the kinda shit that you would use to turn the tables
the kinda shit that youd put away in a vault
so that people can't judge and call it my fault
I wont take anything or consider it a joke
I wont laugh If I do that i'll be forced to envoke
Ill have the reasons to kill people without clear conditions
I'll be classified a Loony and placed in differant positions
What you call Hell, I'd say you dunno what ur missin
What you see threw I laugh because ur all chicken
To pull off something that dont envolve carvin ur own path
It's like u can't whipe ur own ass, or finish short tasks
It's Like that, People rely to much on one another
Well heres for the fucker who wants the undercover
the inside scoop to every anwser around
They wanna pull ur eyelids over yur eyes and push you down
Well I stand My own Ground I fight my own Fights
I run mine Hopefully You choose to run yo life
Cause People reactin fast over the past it's back
then that doesnt matter Cause this whole world is gonna crash

(Chorus)
I'm going crazy My Brain is hazi losin focus "hush"
I'm goin nutz lookin at butts that i can never touch
Im wreckless Abandoned in my profound world
I'm gona do this I must, I'm gonna work on this girl
I dont wanna set No examples for no one
Knowing that i am half crazy Bitch "SO WHAT"
I'm mere normal so no excuse to never give in
This song aint about a girl it's the world that I live in

(Verse 2)
Now if your foolin around you might get a glimpse of the light
If you didnt catch that heres the recap It's subliminal for life
It's a joke cause we live to die, we die to live question is why ?
Why put more in this garbage then returned why do we try ?
I'll tell you why, I'm just playin I can't anwser that shit
So let's just go on with our lives and do what people expect
Lets do the same shit that everybody else does
Go threw school waiste ur life remember u only live once
Ur not promised the 15 years of knoledge to be Important
instead we takin orders gettin fucked over and tortured
I don't expect people to give a shit about my opinion
It takes someone to be a soldier to explain to these infants
These arent small hits or anything you cant possibly understand
Cause if it is I guess Schools Good I am corrected where I stand
people have there own beliefs and this for me is gonna stick
And if anybody's gotta problem with that suck on my D***
Cause what i care about is gettin my facts out to the people
I may not be a doctor but lyrically i know how to treat you
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Postby Vettori » Jul 1st, '06, 17:41

Yea it would be nice for some people to post there thoughts on this lol
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Postby rhiannon » Jul 1st, '06, 17:57

i like it i like tha verses most tha chorus thing idk lol nice work :flower:
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Postby FTW » Jul 1st, '06, 20:32

very good :smoking:
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Postby Vettori » Jul 6th, '06, 20:48

thx alot for those who sid sumthing lmao
wow this site is really dying out aint it
hmmm
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