Bigray - Cocky

[Francesco]

Structure your pieces a little better & sharpen your rhymes a bit little homie... rather than that a good piece overall. I liked the content & the passion... You've been heavy for the last couple of weeks or so!

[Sam.]

Structure sucked lol. Thankfully the flow wasn't that much affected by it. I could imagine a slow pace flow for this. Content was, well distinguished, unique to say the least. You kinda went west-coast with it. If you truly want to learn about structure, you should read pieces by Ego and Spyder. They are really good at it. Also, work on your Multis and try and use different words to rhyme.

[Snakebeast]

I liked the structure, actually....until line 15-16, where the bars got drastically shorter. The rhymes were simple, but it was easy to find the flow at it. And, as Sam said, try to use more multis. It adds more dimensions to your verses.

[Francesco]

Thanks guys for the feed...spit this with the beamer Benz n Bentley beat it will flow nicely on that beat.

Ok that's even more like it...

[Sam.]

Thanks guys for the feed...spit this with the beamer Benz n Bentley beat it will flow nicely on that beat.

You should have mentioned it before hand, haha.