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Postby ThomasAguanis » Jul 4th, '06, 23:50

just did this on zombie land but felt like osting it here too. i havent wrote in a while(feels like a long time) so i decided to see if i still had it...

trying to get back in writing mode, turn into a fighting toad/
i'm biting foes and shooting lightning bows demolishing all fools/
im abolishing all rules polishing all tools they're shiny ready to go/
only one man behind me and he said he could flow but hes half assed/
tried to glasp cash and he passed gas so I smashed fast, and with one last slash/
his ass passed and he just dosed then decomposed in the ground/
all the foes that i've found already know that the're clowns but challenge me anyway/
no talent, they plenty gay but im gonna stop now, me flop how? i cant cause im back on the top now/
B.K.A. The King of Kale A.K.A. The Superfood Sensai
I still rap better than you.

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Postby katastrophe » Jul 4th, '06, 23:58

nice
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Postby Shadyluva » Jul 5th, '06, 00:19

THAT WAS A GOOD READ..NiiCE JOB! :8)
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Postby ThomasAguanis » Jul 5th, '06, 00:24

thanks guys.
now i think im gonna try to write some verses i have to write..
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Postby autotooner » Jul 5th, '06, 06:15

nice job... which reminds me, I haven't written in a while...
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Postby ThomasAguanis » Jul 5th, '06, 15:29

thanks autotooner and sarah
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Postby neha » Jul 5th, '06, 16:23

nice
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