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The Takeover

Postby Spyder » Jul 25th, '13, 06:12

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fuck playin, im just sayin your no thing and so sloppy
go in the ring, bell go *ding* we both swing you no Rocky,
dug graves, come with your bug spray i know my flow cocky
watch my 'hands' cause not even "big Ben" could cold clock me.
yeah yeah we know, shit, aint really trippin or dissin those Ego kids
just taking advantage of these pussies and rookies like Geno... Smith ;)
are you the bomb or the flare? you talkin... i'm there
this kid is Samson, all your "strength" must have 'gone with the hair!"
i'm a furore controllin, more so murder opponents beyond stirrin the potion
make some lame "Parker" reference you feel the Heat in the Spur of the moment.
its bogus, only lost to one in a while as far as i'm concerned
Slik had to summon the devil to get up on the level of Hiesenberg.
Spy just murked. its iconic, i vomit when hearin i lost it, i beat you
i feel ED's name is ironic, virgins prolly as hard as a pastor in a pre-school.
by the way tell your better half, get some quality and make a real track
i was listening to DGAF and was like.... damn it i love illmac.
drop shots to your spleen, legs BLAM got you upside down like mean keg stands
someone tell Sam... I DONT WANT GREEN EGGS AND HAM.
anyone i didnt mention, Bigray Menzo Crash Trimss PainKiller
... your straight filler.
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Re: The Takeover

Postby 12characters » Jul 25th, '13, 06:22

Spyder wrote:this kid is Samson, all your "strength" must have 'gone with the hair!"

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Re: The Takeover

Postby PAINKILLƎR » Jul 25th, '13, 06:31

Image CW has been up in flames lately, I fucking love it.

Very impressive man. Lots of great punches, rhyming was on point like usual, flowed well. I loved the Geno Smith line and good god the Parker line was executed perfectly haha. Also knew if I were gonna be mentioned that you'd use the filler rhyme tbh. Great drop man. Really nice.
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Re: The Takeover

Postby Spyder » Jul 25th, '13, 07:00

Thanks fam, yeah I noticed everyone callin out everyone so I was like, I gotta get on this.
Thanks for the feed guys
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Re: The Takeover

Postby SliK » Jul 25th, '13, 08:23

I love all the name dropping lately :y:
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Re: The Takeover

Postby Sam. » Jul 25th, '13, 21:16

Pretty good, dude. I lol'd at Geno's line. Wasn't much intense like your usual stuff, but still passable.
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Re: The Takeover

Postby Spyder » Jul 25th, '13, 22:01

just shots homles lol
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