Dilz - Underground Universe Contest Entry

[FxTDilz]

Have a listen, lyrics are in songs description. Winner of contest gets a collab with Street Light.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=XTVKTrW5iTA

LoF - viewtopic.php?f=38&t=162532&p=2266234#p2266234

[Eedee]

I'm REALLY diggin' the flow on this, bro. You feel so fucking comfortable on the mic. I love to hear this shit from you. Finally finding your sound, etc.

Lyrics/rhyming and all are solid. Some awkward lines hehe, but nothing I'd beat you over the head with a shitty toilet bowl with.

[MistaVijilantee]

Wasn't a fan.
Where yo punches at dawg?

[MistaVijilantee]

Your flow was consistent, except is it just me or was the recording a little muddy.

[FxTDilz]

Where yo punches at dawg?

Are you actually being serious here?

[B.A.D.]

I like the flow, but you gotta work on the mixing man. The small delays are not that nice, I would recommend to get rid of it, and if you add echo make the first delay volume very very low so it doesn't distort the next bar. I love the delivery and energy but I personally dont like how it sounds, I think you should smooth it out a little bit.

Anyhow, I like the lyrics very much and the flow is very consistent. Its the first time I hear a track from you and I'm digging it, I'll give you a couple likes on youtube man, keep at it.

Work a bit on the mixing, probably compress the vox a little bit more and boost the low end a bit.

coolio, keep at it

[Eedee]

I mixed this, man. So my bad. I'll take your advice though. Especially on the delay part.

edit: Just went back and put the first delay at -12dB then the rest at normal and it sounds a helluva lot better. Thanks for the tip!

[B.A.D.]

edit: Just went back and put the first delay at -12dB then the rest at normal and it sounds a helluva lot better. Thanks for the tip!

hahaha my pleasure man, I'm glad I helped

[Eedee]

I'm still learning the technical side of mixing.

[FxTDilz]

You're not killing any rappers brother.

Go to this page - https://www.facebook.com/EternityEnterp ... ertainment
then look through it for the other entries and try tell me my rap didn't kill them. Know your shit before speaking bro

[FxTDilz]

I like the flow, but you gotta work on the mixing man. The small delays are not that nice, I would recommend to get rid of it, and if you add echo make the first delay volume very very low so it doesn't distort the next bar. I love the delivery and energy but I personally dont like how it sounds, I think you should smooth it out a little bit.

Anyhow, I like the lyrics very much and the flow is very consistent. Its the first time I hear a track from you and I'm digging it, I'll give you a couple likes on youtube man, keep at it.

Work a bit on the mixing, probably compress the vox a little bit more and boost the low end a bit.

coolio, keep at it

Thanks for the feedback bro. Yea usually I just send my work to eedee and let him do his thing with it lol. I have tried telling him to look into mixing more and keep learning new stuff but he doesn't really listen haha. but yea thanks for the feed man, winner gets a collab with street light so hope thats me

[Eedee]

I like the flow, but you gotta work on the mixing man. The small delays are not that nice, I would recommend to get rid of it, and if you add echo make the first delay volume very very low so it doesn't distort the next bar. I love the delivery and energy but I personally dont like how it sounds, I think you should smooth it out a little bit.

Anyhow, I like the lyrics very much and the flow is very consistent. Its the first time I hear a track from you and I'm digging it, I'll give you a couple likes on youtube man, keep at it.

Work a bit on the mixing, probably compress the vox a little bit more and boost the low end a bit.

coolio, keep at it

Thanks for the feedback bro. Yea usually I just send my work to eedee and let him do his thing with it lol. I have tried telling him to look into mixing more and keep learning new stuff but he doesn't really listen haha. but yea thanks for the feed man, winner gets a collab with street light so hope thats me

Smh.

[MistaVijilantee]

I like the flow, but you gotta work on the mixing man. The small delays are not that nice, I would recommend to get rid of it, and if you add echo make the first delay volume very very low so it doesn't distort the next bar. I love the delivery and energy but I personally dont like how it sounds, I think you should smooth it out a little bit.

Anyhow, I like the lyrics very much and the flow is very consistent. Its the first time I hear a track from you and I'm digging it, I'll give you a couple likes on youtube man, keep at it.

Work a bit on the mixing, probably compress the vox a little bit more and boost the low end a bit.

coolio, keep at it

Thanks for the feedback bro. Yea usually I just send my work to eedee and let him do his thing with it lol. I have tried telling him to look into mixing more and keep learning new stuff but he doesn't really listen haha. but yea thanks for the feed man, winner gets a collab with street light so hope thats me

Smh.

"Don't bite the hand that feeds you" - Yeezus