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PAINKILLER - Control TR (Rolly Response)

Postby PAINKILLƎR » Aug 15th, '13, 18:25

http://forum.trshady.com/viewtopic.php?f=24&t=162346

All in good fun, something quick nothing personal :shifty:

First off fuck ninja's like roll he seeming to brawl
But just do like a rolly Poly and crawl into a ball
You should aim for 5 seconds when your girl is involved
Cuz 2 ain't enough, the distress of your bitch finally been solved
So fuuuuuuuuuuuuuck yooooou biiiiiiiiitch!!!!!
Yo, suuuuuuuuuuuuuuck 2 diiiiiiiiiiiicks!!!!!
and I'll be like Em and scream all the fuck I want
And won't fucking stop till silver gets a job
What the fuck is wrong with you quit your quiverin' and sobs
This is survival of the fittest but Jagoda's just killing the vibe
Even though the king has arrived he won't stop till your will is deprived
Fucking Eedee frontin' like he know me, Emma's mine, that's my trophy homie
Dissing my friends? wheeeeeeeeew, I'm the one and only
But do I got a big enough ego to claim all of Canada mine?
Naw, I don't mad get and try to be slick and diss a whole country, fine
But what I can do is shake my head at some fans
I'm always thinking wtf is wrong with some like damn
Should I point and laugh at them or let a man
Dickride whoever he wants like an omega Stan
KRIT ain't the king yet so sit down but don't grief
Cole drops average shit but mr don't give a fuck still won't leave
Kanye's last drop fell apart yet clowns go on and call it art
Praising it calling it daring innovating and smart (pffft)
I'll just Invite Alm as an honoree only to call my diss poverty
But TR's my bitch and I just busted on her T
So honor me, and I couldn't give a flying fuck if you hate me
Don't even try to challenge me in a battle I already ate 3
Talk behind my back? who cares we're not friends and I don't respect you
Test me, I'll be like my brother Hesky on Kenny and reject you
But it's not like I haven't noticed nor noted shit
Shit I dont get why i havent been promoted yet
It's crazy especially since I'm nuts deep, in-SajN!
I need a change in my name, shit wtf am I saying
Who the fuck is Pain? Well come on guess who?
Angel de la muerte o hombre de la gente?
I could be bad or I could be good and mend it
So be fair warned my shit'll have your skin torn
Have you wishing you never been born, the devil's been horned
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Re: PAINKILLER - Control TR (Rolly Response)

Postby LIL_B » Aug 15th, '13, 18:35

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Re: PAINKILLER - Control TR (Rolly Response)

Postby PAINKILLƎR » Aug 15th, '13, 18:36

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Re: PAINKILLER - Control TR (Rolly Response)

Postby LIL_B » Aug 15th, '13, 18:43

PAINKILLƎR wrote:http://forum.trshady.com/viewtopic.php?f=24&t=162346

Kanye's last drop fell apart yet clowns go on and call it art
Praising it calling it daring innovating and smart (pffft)

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Re: PAINKILLER - Control TR (Rolly Response)

Postby PAINKILLƎR » Aug 15th, '13, 19:08

mononym wrote:
PAINKILLƎR wrote:I need a change in my name, shit wtf am I saying


is that for me or is it a misleading choice of words? Image

lol @ that omega and hesky lines doe

Lmao naw I meant change in colour like being a vet you get a colour change. I followed it up from the SajN promoting line. You get it haha sometimes my lines can be pretty vague but yeah that wasn't a diss.

Thanks everybody doe
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Re: PAINKILLER - Control TR (Rolly Response)

Postby Just Silver » Aug 15th, '13, 20:12

loved the name dropping lol gotta reread and feed officially
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Re: PAINKILLER - Control TR (Rolly Response)

Postby PAINKILLƎR » Aug 15th, '13, 20:35

Should have name dropped more, rolly's diss getting more attention.
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Re: PAINKILLER - Control TR (Rolly Response)

Postby JAGODA » Aug 15th, '13, 20:39

Thanks for the shout-out! :D :y:
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Re: PAINKILLER - Control TR (Rolly Response)

Postby PAINKILLƎR » Aug 15th, '13, 20:42

Rollefsen wrote:
PAINKILLƎR wrote:Should have name dropped more, rolly's diss getting more attention.

Ofcourse it is, I'm the Kdot, you're the Joell.

Nah, I'm Wasalu and I murked your ass even Soul caught feels. whew

JAGODA wrote:Thanks for the shout-out! :D :y:

Jagoda! :b:
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Re: PAINKILLER - Control TR (Rolly Response)

Postby PAINKILLƎR » Aug 15th, '13, 20:50

Wasalu da gawd = Lupe Fiasco ...c'mon Rolly!

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PAINKILLƎR wrote:Nah, I'm Wasalu and I murked your ass even Soul caught feels. whew


#powerful

wasalu #1

Wasalu #1 forever
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Re: PAINKILLER - Control TR (Rolly Response)

Postby SoldierShady » Aug 15th, '13, 21:12

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Re: PAINKILLER - Control TR (Rolly Response)

Postby Just Silver » Aug 15th, '13, 22:15

the flow inthe beginning was rough and the screaming part didnt help lol after the first name drop which is me lol it picks up

the other parts that arent name dropping it sounds like u point fun at cole stans and ye which i liked that art line

if there was more wordplay with members names it couldve been an improvement but obviously it was just a fun piece

didnt know u won 3 battles either :o
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Re: PAINKILLER - Control TR (Rolly Response)

Postby Mr.DGAF » Aug 16th, '13, 01:04

Hah, nice drop dude. Liking the inspiration here.
You'd be surprised...
How many truths you can hide in flows

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Re: PAINKILLER - Control TR (Rolly Response)

Postby Eedee » Aug 16th, '13, 06:34

Fuck.
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Re: PAINKILLER - Control TR (Rolly Response)

Postby PAINKILLƎR » Aug 16th, '13, 06:40

Eedee wrote:Fuck.

What's up brother
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