Him Shadow - Sleep Talkin'

[Him Shadow]

link: viewtopic.php?f=38&t=162759

I'd really like to hear some opinion on this, somethin' about my English, accent, lyrics, voice... I did post my songs here 2 times, but no one bother to say something


https://soundcloud.com/izabela-rucha-a/ ... -freestyle

[Eedee]

Hmm, the "sleep talking" part at the beginning had nice echo on it. And the pitch change was okay as well.

As for the actual rapping, it seems like you have the gist of flow down. The adlib layers were mixed weird, they're too loud paired with the main vocals. Also the beat overpowers you a lot.

Once you fix the mixing, I think we'll be able to hear your voice better. Right now, I can tell your voice would be awesome with the right mixing.

[Him Shadow]

thanks for reply I know I'm not so good at mixing vocals, next time maybe I'll give it to my friend who does that

[metsfan1121]

Mixing was definitely the biggest fault. The beat, delivery, flow, were all there and sounded good, they were just all jumbled too much. There's a little slim in your voice too. I think you should drop an acapella on here, it will gives a better sample to judge.

[Him Shadow]

I would give the acapella but I'm not at home now for weeks, so... If I will record somethin' better with better mixing I'll give it here to judge

[ladelsofgravy]

def sounds very good for an fun indie project but not fit if you're looking for a career in rap. it does sound a lot like d12 and eminem, which is good nostalgia, but in the end, you need to be a bit more unique.

the flow is very good, but at times it is jumbled as an above user said. for a rap that really wasn't fast, the words were less audible than they should have been.

[Him Shadow]

thanks for the points you made I don't look for a career, I record songs just for fun and 'cause I love hip-hop