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[Elision]

Here's Tech's verse from Prozak's "One of these Days":

one of these days i'mma grow up and stop gettin tore up
one of these days i'mma blow up and show up plush
one day i'm really gonna go up chuck
i'm low, just stuck, cause lately it ain't no luck, fuck
it's like my dough cut up the fact that I blow buck sucks
i need some more ducks to fold up and hold up stuff
i'mma roll up, what, some yellow stuff, puff
i'm in more ruts than a no-crushed I'm a sure 'nuf bust
one of these days fans are gonna blow up, Kutt
won't be anymore hush hush, about doing our show, just trust
in our statements cause it aint no 'nough rushed to go get my flow cause radio schmucks they so duck us
i'm swole up, cause a hoe just struck -- frickin IRS admires stress, i'm ready to throw knucks up
one of these days i'mma go nuts, what, like right now this life styles cause it's so rough, tough

[CrashBand]

If it is not necessary to make it seem natural, it's not good or impressive in the slightest.... objectively

can you elaborate on this a bit? i feel like i'm not following you, because there's a lot of robotic-like rhyme schemes i've heard that sounded amazing.

If you think "My pet parrot can talk like a human/Time let carrot man walk fine and truman/rhyme set garrot fan squawk dyke a crewman"

Is better or as good as "Holy or unholy, only have one homie, only this gun, lonely cause don't anyone know me" you're wrong.

This is an unfair comparison. One doesn't make any sense while the other makes perfect sense.

With the tacit premise that it makes sense and sounds natural

Of course I prefer it make sense. But I genuinely enjoy/prefer weird-sounding flows and rhyme schemes that shouldn't work on a beat, but somehow do. http://youtu.be/54sv0-6Zviw?t=4m7s
That's what I'm referring to when I say unnatural. Not talking about shit like Kendrick's verse here viewtopic.php?f=6&t=164054

It's kind of self-explanatory, lol. If it sounds natural, it should be phrasing that people would actually use. That is impressive rhyming. Otherwise rhyming becomes very easy, and you could even go to the extreme and rhyme anything you want, like I did before, lol.

[CrashBand]

Spoonfull:

"She fucking hates Brooklyn, I made her stay here, she’ll start packing when the April rain clears"

Sadistik:

"How many hues of blue hide behind a grin? I don't know, but they usually do in spite of my intents"

"I push away the love, to stay alive in case that I mistook the hate for trust"

Tom Scott:

"And I wanna say that’s the dog in me, and a dog don’t know no monogamy,
but when a dog goes home, on his own, to his bone and thinks about what he did off his leash.."

"And I don’t wanna die alone, but is that reason enough?
Is there even a reason to love? Sometime I don’t even believe in the stuff"

"So I breathe in a fresh breath, suppress stress, re-access, get dressed, get clean
and forget Steph left, next step next scene, I’m too alive to let death get me down"

Cruger:

"fuck a t.v. guide, I'm at my PC high watching 3D pipes"

[Trimss]

If you don't like a thread just skip it. No one is forcing you to read everything. It could become a circle jerk and you wouldn't even know it if you didn't click here. Not every thread has to be liked by everyone. Let people enjoy posting rhymes if they want to.

No I don't respond with answers that fit a script
So the repetition'll make a nigga flip
We in the game of smoke and mirrors, those engineerin a bigger spliff
blowin circles out they mouth, gettin praised but the shit'll shift
I never lived a myth, if I said it I did it
Never alleged, word to dead I gripped a fifth (boom!)
I made my housing tenement a strip, movin medicine and nicks
When I seen 'em comin I jetted from them pricks (ohh!)
And still to this day though she clean I wish my mommy never sniffed
But the hurt is makin me better with this gift (look)
I'm live with this ink you could, die in a blink and
Y'all got the nerve to ask me why do I drink and
Motherfucker sometimes I cry when I think and

I absolutely love this verse. Wow.

[Elision]

tech's verse from yukmouth's "go nutz"

yates
mic checker tecca 3-4
5 more will get you up to n9ne with the beast flow
drink more like i'm celebratin cinco de mayo in Chico
we those people that be so beast and cheat dough
we go N.U.T.S. in K.C. Mo
don't make me show
attitude that may be snowed when your mental state be hoe
that'll straight be so
wasteful, interracial huevos they go in a grave below
neeto, she know we be low and me throw the B though
her hero seem O, be hoe, ego B-double-O S.T.E.D. though
i'm B bro
and i'll teach your people lethal like i'm C-bo
get evil i'm tech neezle for b'zle i'm leavin em on the sea sho -- (sea shore)
zero, left with nothing but beetles, crows snakes and mosquitos
tryna vito my cheetos
no way amigo, scheemin me? hoe's illegal, especially if you're feeble
sick and nuts, we G.O.

[CrashBand]

Even if you don't really like that type of rhyme, that Celph Titled one was pretty fuckin sweet.

I wasn't commenting on his examples being bad, just his general misunderstanding of "good rhyming".

[Elision]

Even if you don't really like that type of rhyme, that Celph Titled one was pretty fuckin sweet.

I wasn't commenting on his examples being bad, just his general misunderstanding of "good rhyming".

Dude I don't misunderstand anything. Do you think I'm a tech fan in spite of you or some shit? jesus christ. What you consider consider good rhyming, I consider to be mediocre. And vise-versa.

http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Subjectivity

And I don't actually believe you're this stupid. You're just being a cunt at this point.

[CrashBand]

lol.

Explain why you think it is good rhyming and my examples are mediocre?

[Elision]

Because while my examples do consist of natural rhymes, instead of leaving it there, the artist goes out of his way to reach out and add as much as he can to complete the melody. Having a full verse that follows the same syllable structure and multi from beginning to end (typically) sounds far more pleasing to me than anything else.

However, I am able to understand why this doesn't apply to everybody. People like class simply have a different ear, you're not so focused on lyrical flairing. It's much more about the message and picture that is painted - as opposed to how well the syllables matched up in each bar and how many words didn't rhyme etc. if i'm wrong about you there, my bad, but you understand.

[CrashBand]

It's not about what you prefer or what sounds more pleasing though, it's about what's better. What's a more impressive display of rhyming. What's more difficult.

If you don't think making sense and sounding natural is the major factor, then I don't know what to say.

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Should I keep stretching it?

[Elision]

If you don't think making sense and sounding natural is the major factor then I don't know what to say.

http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Straw_man

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Should I keep stretching it?

If it wasn't gibberish.

[CrashBand]

It wasn't a straw man, lol.

That's been my argument the whole time, I'll leave it with the audience.

[Elision]

let's not forget when Dizaster started freestyling on DNA

You never clapped a revolver, I'll flat-line you
snipe at your heart like the final boss you battle in Contra
So act like Manic, I'll pop ya
Give me that deadly stare I'll let it air leaving shells everywhere like Italian pasta
You roll with a pack of imposters
You don't wanna scrap I'll pull a mac and I'll (sock at ya bitch?) slapped with the impact of A-Class crashin his Honda
I'll strike you, faster than the black African Mamba and send your body bag back to Rwanda
Battling me is worse off than sharing a bath tub with Blanka or getting a back rub massage from Mortal Kombat's Baraka
Your breath smells like asshole and cacka
You need to grab some Binaca
I'll backhand you and I will damage your chakra
The day you beat me is the day everyone in Canada considers Snow an actual rasta
What you know about weed? your whole life you probably only seen 2 bags of ganja
I'm a youtube superstar, everyday I have new fans from Deutchland to Jakarta
From buktan to Combala, Domican Republic, and yucads in cabanas
? all of them ? sri lanka down to Sudan and Uganda but all you have is 2 fans, you're Kitana

i'll never forget watching that

[Hadez]

In case nobody has put this yet... Crooked I from "Loud Noises"

I'm a - menace villain, my pen is sitting spilling, my lyrics killing
Then I let you witness shit when it hit the ceiling
The niggas willing to give the listeners the sickest feeling
Like mixing some Benadryl and penicillin
Then I'm filling the clip with a written
Can you picture my pistol drilling?
A million women and children when I'm illing
But it isn't real, it's a rap
On the realest of rap
How could you possibly stop the Apocalypse
When I'm atomic bombing the populous
Shock the metropolis hostile as a kid
Popping the Glock at his moms and his pops
Then he hops in his drop with his iPod rocking the Slaughterish
Documentation and lyrics I write with confidence
Write like a columnist slash novelist
I'm in this game to demolish it, establish my dominance
Over prominent rappers you popping shit 'til you opposite
I can spit ominous so spit politics now I'm Haile Selassie, Gandhi, and Pac
Of this hip hop genre, bitch!

[Solace]

slapped with the impact of A-Class crashin his Honda

Reminds me of when Class got into a car accident and was in the hospital for months