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Postby Hunneh_Buns » Jul 18th, '06, 22:44

This is a haiku

I am very bad at these

The end of haiku

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Cherry blossoms grow

They look like little candies

I want to eat them

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Munchie thought it was really good. :happy:
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Postby Lil Pimp Tell 'Em » Jul 18th, '06, 22:45

da fuck? :confusion:
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Postby MuNxMuN » Jul 18th, '06, 22:46

yes it's good :) too bad it's not about nature which is what haikus are supposed to be about :whistle:



Lil' PimP wrote:da fuck? :confusion:


you obviously don't know what a haiku is :loser:



edit: you should do a tanka now :) :laughing:
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Postby Hunneh_Buns » Jul 18th, '06, 22:47

Fine, i'll post my other haiku from grade 7
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Postby Lil Pimp Tell 'Em » Jul 18th, '06, 22:47

:confusion: ok ill make a haiku then

this is a haiku
im good at these
end of haiku

:confusion: :unsure:
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Postby MuNxMuN » Jul 18th, '06, 22:48

Lil' PimP wrote::confusion: ok ill make a haiku then

this is a haiku
im good at these
end of haiku

:confusion: :unsure:


that's not a haiku :whistle:




i'm proud of my nerdiness :p
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Postby Hunneh_Buns » Jul 18th, '06, 22:50

Theres my haiku from Grade 7. I had to do them for a Japan project. I got a good mark. :happy:
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Postby Lil Pimp Tell 'Em » Jul 18th, '06, 22:52

:confusion: whoever thought of these is a reatard
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Postby MuNxMuN » Jul 18th, '06, 22:52

^ are you calling japs retarded? :shocked:

@maybe that's not a haiku :unsure: wow i'm surprised you people don't know what a haiku is :giggle:



i made one about chickens once :laughing: and it wasn't even for english class it was for orchestra :laughing:
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Postby Hunneh_Buns » Jul 18th, '06, 22:54

Japs are very smart people.

Munchie comment on my other haiku. :flower:
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Postby Lil Pimp Tell 'Em » Jul 18th, '06, 22:54

lemme try one

penis is big

i dont lick them

but hb eats them

:confusion: dat one?
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Postby MuNxMuN » Jul 18th, '06, 22:54

Hunneh_Buns wrote:Japs are very smart people.

Munchie comment on my other haiku. :flower:


it's good :)

and marker that's still not a haiku :laughing:
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Postby MuNxMuN » Jul 18th, '06, 22:57

McMaybe wrote:
MuNxMuN wrote:
Hunneh_Buns wrote:Japs are very smart people.

Munchie comment on my other haiku. :flower:


it's good :)

and marker that's still not a haiku :laughing:



u guys are stupid for having such shit things



heres an american haiku or whatever its called


i have a gun
i dont like people that bullshit
i shoot, now your dead


i'm not jap :unsure: :sweating: and that's STILL not a haiku :)
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Postby Lil Pimp Tell 'Em » Jul 18th, '06, 22:59

lmao @maybe :laughing:

:angry: im gunna get one even if i have to spam up this whole forum :angry:


i am high

i see the sky

the sky is gone


:smoking: you know thats one
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Postby MuNxMuN » Jul 18th, '06, 23:00

McMaybe wrote:then what the fuck is?


maybe if you'd pay attention in english class you'd know :unsure: :laughing:



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