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Postby MuNxMuN » Jul 18th, '06, 23:53

Lil' PimP wrote:this is all me :smoking:


all alone on he chair

beating away at porn

realizng i have no life


:smoking: that one :'(


you should look up the word syllable before you try again ;)
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Postby Lil Pimp Tell 'Em » Jul 18th, '06, 23:56

:shocked: i get it!!!

this is the one :smoking:


fall is a big ball

always bouncing up and down

leaves flying around


:smoking:
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Postby MuNxMuN » Jul 19th, '06, 21:25

Lil' PimP wrote::shocked: i get it!!!

this is the one :smoking:


fall is a big ball

always bouncing up and down

leaves flying around


:smoking:


yes it is......you're a GENIUS!!!!! :shocked2:



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Postby Lil Pimp Tell 'Em » Jul 19th, '06, 21:26

yes thats one for lil pimp

right 1 - 211234567 wrong

:smoking: im proud of myself
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Postby ThomasAguanis » Jul 19th, '06, 21:28

"you are a genuis"
max just tried to be funny
but no one agreed
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I still rap better than you.
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Postby Lil Pimp Tell 'Em » Jul 19th, '06, 21:29

:laughing:

thomas dissed you in a haiku
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Postby MuNxMuN » Jul 19th, '06, 21:31

ThomasAguanis wrote:"you are a genuis"
max just tried to be funny
but no one agreed


:shocked: after what i did for you and killa you diss me?!??! :angry: :swear:

thomas is a girl
he likes to eat his taco
cause cookie said so


haha that rhymed too :) :smoking:



lmao i'm jp thomas :p
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Postby ThomasAguanis » Jul 19th, '06, 21:34

was not a diss miss
just a quick poem for me
to be so freely
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Postby MuNxMuN » Jul 19th, '06, 21:35

ThomasAguanis wrote:was not a diss miss
just a quick poem for me
to be so freely


too bad second line wasn't 7 syllables :p
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Postby ThomasAguanis » Jul 19th, '06, 21:37

MuNxMuN wrote:
ThomasAguanis wrote:was not a diss miss
just a quick poem for me
to be so freely


too bad second line wasn't 7 syllables :p


yes
just1 a2 quick3 po4 em5 for6 me7
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Postby MuNxMuN » Jul 19th, '06, 21:41

either you suck at leet talk or there's something wrong with your comp :p :giggle:
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Postby ThomasAguanis » Jul 19th, '06, 21:42

MuNxMuN wrote:either you suck at leet talk or there's something wrong with your comp :p :giggle:


huh? :confusion:
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Postby Hunneh_Buns » Jul 19th, '06, 21:43

MuNxMuN wrote:either you suck at leet talk or there's something wrong with your comp :p :giggle:

You are stupid. :p
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Postby Lil Pimp Tell 'Em » Jul 19th, '06, 21:44

Hunneh_Buns wrote:
MuNxMuN wrote:either you suck at leet talk or there's something wrong with your comp :p :giggle:

You are stupid. :p


*goes in to katastrophe mode*

i agree
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Postby MuNxMuN » Jul 19th, '06, 21:45

i gets it now :laughing: but i thought poem was 1 syllable :unsure: :p
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