lyrics for my track

[Mc Cubz]

hi im Mc Cubz and i wrote this song for the tmw mixtape - il either use this as my solo or another one (or both if they'll let me).

I need to still ask him but I was guna ask asprine to do the chorus for me. Either with my lryics or his own (im not satisfied with my chorus lyrics atm).
Please could I have some feedback and if theres any bits ppl dont understand etc could they let me know so i can ammend it. Thanks for readin:

Instrumental: mob deep when you hear that/akon locked up


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[katastrophe]

its pretty good homie..cant wait to hear it in audio

[Mc Cubz]

thanks for the two comments reli apreciated well asprine has agreed to do the chorus, so it wil prob be made after we make afew tracks with all tmw members on for the mixtape

[polluted]

deep concept though way too depressive...
in the style of Immortal Technique.

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[Mc Cubz]

deep concept though way too depressive...
in the style of Immortal Technique.

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thats pretty perceptive that lol I've bin listening to quite abit of immortal Teach recently lol so it prob had a influence on it lol

[Coccoa]

Not too gangsta. Where is the bitches? Where is the guns? Where is the cash?

[Mc Cubz]

Not too gangsta. Where is the bitches? Where is the guns? Where is the cash?

I knw lol wait for a tmw track there will be one or more of the killer punches etc I will still make the deep tracks tho lol, cos im exploring these atm, i used to onli write about the gangester stuf, i never realy wrote tbh jus battled ppl ive got a few of the battle rounds on audio cd but i lost most of it on the comp, when i figure out how to get the cd files to audio i can show u them lol.

[polluted]

deep concept though way too depressive...
in the style of Immortal Technique.

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thats pretty perceptive that lol I've bin listening to quite abit of immortal Teach recently lol so it prob had a influence on it lol

yo, u nowudimeam homie? IT is the illest badass mafaka ever.
he crashes it straight up.

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