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Postby rhiannon » Jul 28th, '06, 14:04

Do u ever jus sit an start to think wat things cud be?
Wonderin what it
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Postby rhiannon » Jul 28th, '06, 14:10

Sarah wrote::( Awwwww. That's sad, but you did a real good job on it hun :flower:




I know how you feel with not seeing your dad :( I don't see mine much no more either. He still sees us every now and then, but he's moved on in my opinion

thanx hun :flower:


an yeah tha same kinda things happenein wit my dad an me...he's movin away so i wont see him even more now
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Postby FTW » Jul 28th, '06, 14:20

that was real good and very emotional
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Postby rhiannon » Jul 28th, '06, 14:22

lol thanx
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Postby sinemm » Jul 28th, '06, 14:49

liked it.. :) :(
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Postby rhiannon » Jul 28th, '06, 14:50

lol thanx :happy:
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Postby sinemm » Jul 28th, '06, 15:19

i have looootttssaaaa poems for my dad too..but they are in my own language.. :)
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Postby rhiannon » Jul 28th, '06, 15:20

sinemm wrote:i have looootttssaaaa poems for my dad too..but they are in my own language.. :)
i got more but i thought this was best....what language is dat?
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Postby sinemm » Jul 28th, '06, 15:31

im from turkey u see and its turkish..
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Postby rhiannon » Jul 28th, '06, 15:36

ahhh cool...well im glad u liked it lol :D
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Postby katastrophe » Jul 28th, '06, 17:18

sad but very good. it touched me :( :'( :flower:
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Postby rhiannon » Jul 28th, '06, 20:49

katastrophe wrote:sad but very good. it touched me :( :'( :flower:
lol thanx :flower:
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Postby polluted » Jul 31st, '06, 06:57

sinemm wrote:i have looootttssaaaa poems for my dad too..but they are in my own language.. :)



kud u post somin in here in Turkish?

wanna taka a look how it looks...lol
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Postby sinemm » Jul 31st, '06, 10:18

polluted wrote:
sinemm wrote:i have looootttssaaaa poems for my dad too..but they are in my own language.. :)



kud u post somin in here in Turkish?

wanna taka a look how it looks...lol


ooh its ok for me ..sure..u dont understand it but i can post :) ;)
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Postby rhiannon » Aug 2nd, '06, 10:53

Clarky wrote:Not bad.

I can see how your accent made some words rhyme lol......
lmao u mean OUR accent.....im not tha only retarded accent person here lmao
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