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Postby ,-,'-{Bar}-',-, » Aug 1st, '06, 11:27

real nice man i i feel yeh bout the internet gangsta :whistle: so ya'll know i dont think im gangsta :sweating: im thug :shifty:
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Postby polluted » Aug 1st, '06, 11:39

lol

u's an 1more keypad killah
but u gut fa nuttin lyk ice vanilla



lol
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Postby ,-,'-{Bar}-',-, » Aug 1st, '06, 11:45

polluted wrote:lol

u's an 1more keypad killah
but u gut fa nuttin lyk ice vanilla



lol


man you got to write so we can understand dont use abbrevations whats " u gut fa nuttin" i know you gut i dunno and fa i dunno and i know nuttin is nothing had whatever :whistle:
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Postby polluted » Aug 1st, '06, 11:56

lol wadju jjust said?
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Postby ,-,'-{Bar}-',-, » Aug 1st, '06, 12:41

u wrote like 2 lines of a rap sorta :whistle: you got to write it so everyone understand yi know :sweating:
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Postby rhiannon » Aug 1st, '06, 13:01

i liked it...some clever rhymes in there...well done :flower:
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Re: McMaybe keystyle

Postby Mc Cubz » Aug 2nd, '06, 01:53

McMaybe wrote:This is just a sample of whats to come lol

KEYSTYLE

i run around naked, with a 20 guage blasted,
and get my ass kicked, by 6 year old kids, how drastic,
my rap is fantastic, best since the invetion of plastic,
if a dictionary is black magic, then bitch, i cast it,
im fast, im spuradic an addict to crack and matic,
i go crazy on static, bitches front then found in the attic,
iv just had it, if life was a cat then id probably cap it,
to many internet gangstas today, actin irratic,
every w.igger with baggy pants, who thinks they can dance,
is now a rapper, like z is , but they still live in a trance,
and them other 12 year old girls, with titty enhancers,
develope a model in vein, but to be deveopin cancer,
its stupid in words, and even dummer in person,
youv probably never seen worse than, a suburban boy cursin,
its insane, two slice's and three shot's but no pain,
thats off topic, like runnin infront of a moving train,
then tie yourself to the tracks, then lay back and relax,
go thru two seizurse, concussions, come back and relapse,
i know i say alot of shit, some people just wouldnt own it,
i know i shouldnt, im probably gonna get sued any moment,
and when i do, il plead guilty, and admitt like 9 crimes,
"judge, i raped 5 times, and jacked a bitches purse, its mine"
but on the list of the criminals, my duty's are minimal,
i may be evil and sinical, but my mind is just mimical,
i saw pokemon, now im throwin round rocks on animals,
i saw this story on discovery, now im a fuckin canabil,
if i were to write a documentary, it would only be one page,
with one line, "pedophile, rapist, sick, underaged",
i may be deranged, but my minds in a state of a change,
on moment im on a stage, the next im locked in a cage,
i guess i just needed to let off, just a little bit rage, ok?



YOOOOOOOooooooo...........
thats reli impressive mayB - reli enjoyed reading that,
Id love u to use some of them lines on our track, cos altought they freestlye they v nice.
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Postby stevethetruth » Aug 2nd, '06, 02:03

nice dude that's wicked good man

i wish i was as good as you
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Postby Infliction » Aug 3rd, '06, 08:27

mad hot man, mad hot, felt like a mix of jeezy and eminem, fuckin sick, keep it up.
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