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Re: Kick in the Door '14

Postby Just Silver » Feb 5th, '14, 20:00

I really liked this especially the molly ollie lines lol I was actually gonna write something similar

I liked the style similar to me you just need more imagery colors sizes and what not
But otherwise flowed fine

I have writers block atm :(
Plz feed one of my pieces
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Re: Kick in the Door '14

Postby Francesco » Feb 7th, '14, 09:15

Nice... :y:
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Re: Kick in the Door '14

Postby Francesco » Feb 9th, '14, 02:10

Aone10 wrote:
Francesco wrote:Nice... :y:

:b:


Post stuff you write more often I guess... :y:
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Re: Kick in the Door '14

Postby Mr.DGAF » Feb 17th, '14, 00:05

Good shit dude, this flowed effortlessly. Very smooth word use, I really liked this piece. Can't say much else man, will be peeping this audio drop.
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How many truths you can hide in flows
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