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Postby stevethetruth » Aug 11th, '06, 17:07

I havn't got a title for the song yet but here's the final version of it
it's goes to the Spend Some Time Beat

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Postby stevethetruth » Aug 11th, '06, 18:08

Feed back please!!!!!!!!!!!
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Postby Coccoa » Aug 11th, '06, 18:19

Where the bitches and guns i asked? :tounge2:
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Postby stevethetruth » Aug 11th, '06, 18:21

Coccoa wrote:Where the bitches and guns i asked? :tounge2:


dude lol i'm saving all that for the bloodline 2 lol
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Postby Coccoa » Aug 11th, '06, 18:24

No dont save em. There aint such thing as "too much bitches and guns"
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Postby stevethetruth » Aug 11th, '06, 18:33

^^^yeah that's true :laughing:
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Postby Coccoa » Aug 11th, '06, 19:10

So keep it gangsuh
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Postby stevethetruth » Aug 11th, '06, 19:11

well not all of us are as gansta as you... :unsure: ............:laughing:


and come on people FEEDBACK PLEASE!!!!!!!!
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Postby stevethetruth » Aug 12th, '06, 01:27

bump
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Postby stevethetruth » Aug 12th, '06, 01:35

G_killa wrote:bitches and guns? :(


ok ok no bitches and guns but what did ya think of it??
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Postby stevethetruth » Aug 12th, '06, 01:41

G_killa wrote:weed?


what the hell that was random
no but really what did you think of the song?????//
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Postby stevethetruth » Aug 12th, '06, 01:44

lol finally i get an actual answer out of ya lo thanks man
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Postby Coccoa » Aug 12th, '06, 03:37

Poor killa wanted some bitches and guns on it. You didnt gave him :tounge2:

Then he aksed about narcotics, which u didnt gave him either :tounge2:
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Postby polluted » Aug 14th, '06, 04:52

bitch
u need a gun to ya temple
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Postby polluted » Aug 14th, '06, 10:55

huh?
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