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A new song i've started to write

Postby stevethetruth » Aug 11th, '06, 03:07

I haven't got a chorus yet and i plan to have someone guest on this track i'm not gonna say who cause i wanna kepp it a surprise

but it goes to the spend some time beat
here it is

please leave feedback!!!


Ok here it is I know I
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Postby Ethos » Aug 11th, '06, 03:16

LOL i like it. :8) cant wait to hear the audio.
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Postby stevethetruth » Aug 11th, '06, 03:35

lol thanks i wrote it all in less than a hour lol
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Postby stevethetruth » Aug 11th, '06, 03:37

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Postby katastrophe » Aug 11th, '06, 03:51

it sucks ass!!! :tounge2: :tounge2: :tounge2: :tounge2:























































lol...im just playin. good job :D :8)
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Postby Coccoa » Aug 11th, '06, 03:51

More bitches and guns in it next time.
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Postby stevethetruth » Aug 11th, '06, 03:57

^^^yeah i'm tryin to write song like you but idk lol

thanks for the comment katastrophe
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Postby Coccoa » Aug 11th, '06, 03:59

Aint nobody as gangsta as i am.
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Postby Ethos » Aug 11th, '06, 04:01

Coccoa wrote:Aint nobody as gangsta as i am.


idk :unsure: i heard chicken little is more gangsta then 50 cent and you idolize him so......
shicken little is prolly more gangsta than you. lol

nah no one on this forum is more gangsta than you. :whistle:
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Postby stevethetruth » Aug 11th, '06, 04:03

Syanied wrote:
Coccoa wrote:Aint nobody as gangsta as i am.


idk :unsure: i heard chicken little is more gangsta then 50 cent and you idolize him so......
shicken little is prolly more gangsta than you. lol

nah no one on this forum is more gangsta than you. :whistle:

hah lmao!!
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Postby stevethetruth » Aug 11th, '06, 14:02

bump.................. :8)
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hey

Postby ripbigproof » Aug 11th, '06, 17:42

love the song
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Re: hey

Postby stevethetruth » Aug 11th, '06, 17:52

ripbigproof wrote:love the song


thanks but check out the final version

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Postby Coccoa » Aug 11th, '06, 18:23

McMaybe wrote:gangsta gangsta, gangsta only sells when your black, if your not, dont do gangsta rap


Eses are more gangsta than blacks, check ur facts. Latin Kings skin u alive where Crips just beat u down.
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Postby stevethetruth » Aug 13th, '06, 02:21

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