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All-American Girl Is Overated

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All-American Girl Is Overated

Postby Rae » Aug 15th, '06, 15:49

Have you ever heard of the all-american girl?
yuck - that image makes me wanna hurl!
Yup ima american,
Yup ima girl,
but im not your ordinary booty shakein whore,
I got alot of interesting things about me,
Other than my cup size,,
I know im a disappointment to my family,
becuz again i am not the all- american girl,
that gets straight A's in school,
becuz im the girl in school thats asleep and drooling,
im not the bible huggin girl in long plad shirts,
im the girl that hangs with all the boys,
that listens to rap music,
that just wants to make it in life,
without being on welfare,
im the tombo thats goofy and crazy,
im the girl that wants to find a happy ending with someone that excepts me for me.

i started writing this as a poem that rhymes ... but then i kinda got pissed off when i was writing it so i couldnt make it rhyme anymore. so i am away that this poem sucks.
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Postby Coccoa » Aug 15th, '06, 17:30

Wutz wrong with booty shaking whores? :unsure:
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Postby Rae » Aug 15th, '06, 17:38

nothins wrong with that ... i was sayin im not the average booty shakin whore ... meaning there is more to me than that. (i hope that makes since)
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Postby Coccoa » Aug 15th, '06, 17:56

Ah
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Postby stevethetruth » Aug 15th, '06, 19:20

i liked it

well at least we know more about you now... :happy:

it's a shame though i guess i have to put the money away oh well :(


lol jk jk :p
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Postby Coccoa » Aug 15th, '06, 19:22

I could comment on it but meh.
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Postby Rae » Aug 15th, '06, 19:31

nah man u keep that money out! i said i am not the "ordinary booty shakin whore" that means i can do more than shake my booty ... but i can shakin it ... that just means u should pay me more ... lol :D
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Postby stevethetruth » Aug 15th, '06, 20:00

ok will do
*turns on shake that*
there's a song you can dance too!!

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Postby Rae » Aug 15th, '06, 20:04

ok ... i can dance to that ... now are u ready 4 it ... well can u handle my dancing? b/c i am know 2 make guys "happy" when i dance ... lol
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Postby stevethetruth » Aug 15th, '06, 20:15

MarshellBM wrote:ok ... i can dance to that ... now are u ready 4 it ... well can u handle my dancing? b/c i am know 2 make guys "happy" when i dance ... lol


niiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiice
me likey what i see
me vewy happy!!!
















LMAO!!! :p
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Postby Rae » Aug 15th, '06, 20:18

Lmao
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Postby Coccoa » Aug 15th, '06, 21:26

Wtf u think we some kind of tricks here? We aint paying no bitch. We let the bitch pay us.
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Postby Rae » Aug 15th, '06, 21:31

yupp i bet ur single 2 ... damn he is tryin to b nice ... y u gotta ruin it ?
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Postby stevethetruth » Aug 15th, '06, 21:31

Coccoa wrote:Wtf u think we some kind of tricks here? We aint paying no bitch. We let the bitch pay us.


you know the sad thing is you are forceed to pay the most cause YOU UGLY


lmao jk :p
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Postby Coccoa » Aug 15th, '06, 21:32

MarshellBM wrote:yupp i bet ur single 2 ... damn he is tryin to b nice ... y u gotta ruin it ?


Girl you can have me for one night only, two at the most. I'm never taken. I wake up next to a stranger every morning.
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