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i know your better than that

Postby Rae » Aug 16th, '06, 16:48

i have a friend named sara,
and ve've been friends ever since grade seven,
i have deep feelings for her,
but i never bother to tell her,
she has a beautiful heart,
but somehow nobody sees it,
and i wanna tell everyone how i feel,
but i think to myself "if they cant see it, so be it",
she is know as the whore of the school,
but theres so much more about her,
its sab becuz shes in a bad relationship,
with a drug dealer thats in tha bloodz,
and everyday she has to make these huge adult desitions,
that a 16 yr. old should never have to think twice about,
when we walk hokme together from school,
i can see fear in her eyes,
becuz she doesnt know what she will be faced with at home,
we both live in blood territory,
with all the lock an loaded boys,
all i want from her is to respect herself,
becuz if she cant who will?

this is really true. but it didnt come out to well in my opinion. but when i say i have "deep feelings" for her .... i only mean as a friend.
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Postby stevethetruth » Aug 16th, '06, 17:42

hmm "deep feelings" lol
jk


but yeah that's pretty screwed up :confusion:
hmmm glad i don't got my foot in a hole like that :sweating:

agian nice peom i liked it :happy:
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Postby Rae » Aug 16th, '06, 17:43

lol thanx 4 ur feedback ... again lol
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