[Good Memories]

[Rae]

Today i thought about you,
and i havent for awhile,
i thought about all the good times we had,
and i started to smile,
the first thing i thought about was our first kiss,
it was so special to me,
like romeo and juliet on the balcony,
the second thing i thought about was when i snuck you in my room,
and we told eachother about our day,
then we layed in my bed,
and you held me and said everything would be ok,
oh0 how can i forget ... the time you got me drunk for tha 1st time,
and i gave you a lap dance,
that you would never forget,
i can remember the day you took my innoscence,
it was great and everything i thought it would be,
so do you see,
you were very special to me,
i enjoyed the goodtimes we had,
but now its time to put them away in my mind,
becuz now is not the time for me to miss you.

[.Giorgo.]

Really dude, ur good. U gave the right words for it. I'm gonna make something too, soon but it's harder for me. English is not my motherlangugue.
But it's is really dope shit, It's easy to understeand and easy to read, not hard words etc. Really, tight. Keep up, .

[,-,'-{Bar}-',-,]

Today i thought about you,
and i havent for awhile,
i thought about all the good times we had,
and i started to smile,
the first thing i thought about was our first kiss,
it was so special to me,
like romeo and juliet on the balcony,
the second thing i thought about was when i snuck you in my room,
and we told eachother about our day,
then we layed in my bed,
and you held me and said everything would be ok,
oh0 how can i forget ... the time you got me drunk for tha 1st time,
and i gave you a lap dance,
that you would never forget,
i can remember the day you took my innoscence,
it was great and everything i thought it would be,
so do you see,
you were very special to me,
i enjoyed the goodtimes we had,
but now its time to put them away in my mind,
becuz now is not the time for me to miss you.

dam man thats great really excellent work i love it your goni get soo good man great potential

[Rae]

aw thanx ... i just started writin stuff about a week ago ... i really enjoy it (love it) ... i hope 2 read some of your stuff! thanx 4 tha feedback! *it helps alot*

[stevethetruth]

nice


NICE


NICE


wicked good girl keep it up
and if you want to do you want to do a song together??
if so hit me up lol


wicked good lyrics keep it up and soon you'll be beter than me lol

[Rae]

thanx! i would love 2 do a song with you ... but i still gotta get a mic. 4 my computer ... i'll b gettin one soon. (thanx 4 sayin "girl" lol)

[stevethetruth]

(thanx 4 sayin "girl" lol)

well i did that because everyone was saying man, or guy so i was like hmmmm i should say girl lol

[Rae]

(thanx 4 sayin "girl" lol)

well i did that because everyone was saying man, or guy so i was like hmmmm i should say girl lol

thanx i appricate that! ur such a great friend!

[,-,'-{Bar}-',-,]

lol id didnt think thats jsut the way i speak lol ill keep it in mind

[Rae]

lol id didnt think thats jsut the way i speak lol ill keep it in mind

lol its ok ... i guess it was kinda stupid 4 me to make my username a guy name ... lol ...

[,-,'-{Bar}-',-,]

lol u should make it your alias or something different coz having marshall in it osme ppl wont take you serious coz you look like another groupie ( not me personally i dont care) but some might lol

[Rae]

lol thanx 4 tha advice ... but it wont let me change it ... i tried to already ... i have 2 make a new account to change tha username. *it sux ... cuz i wanna change it*

[,-,'-{Bar}-',-,]

just pm asp or tr and theyll hapilly do it for you if you ask nicely

[Rae]

oh thats cool ... thanx i'll do that!

[stevethetruth]

(thanx 4 sayin "girl" lol)

well i did that because everyone was saying man, or guy so i was like hmmmm i should say girl lol

thanx i appricate that! ur such a great friend!

no prob so are you