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Keystyle- Killing The Shit

Postby ThomasAguanis » Aug 18th, '06, 00:16

start time: 6:32
stopped: 640- sister called
resumed-646
finished-7:15
I'm killing the shit that I'm willing to spit, filling the clips? no I'm sealing the lips/
feeling the hips of every rhyme, every time i try to unwind all these thoughts fly in my mind/
I'm trying to climb these vines cause I'm dying to find myself in myself sometimes/
need help getting in line these finds that I find inside now stop..rewind just stop the time/
the clock is mine, every second is needed, so every second you're feeded thoughts I repeated/
deleted from one self, inserted into others brains, but it hurt kids mothers pain and brothers shame/
it's time for another regin for me, I claim to be the same as thee professes their being/
the messes you're seeing decreesing they're great need blesses from being in higher power/
this dire hour is kinda sour, so I came in with some fire power towards these lying cowards/
i overpowerded them, took the throughn, the crooks were stoned, then I looked back home/
shook black foam in the sky, I made clouds, I roam and I'm sly so I gave crowds bows cause they loud/
I say vowed, that I'll defeat anyone, beat everyone, and when it's said and done and the red has come/
you'll be dead, I'm one, the soul surviver, also the soul reviver, I resserect the deceased/
from to they're head to they're feet, fill in the creases and cracks, put they're teeth in their backs/
this releases the facts known to man, I just shown this man that I own this clan/
so alone I stand, you're petty, a sore, Im ready for war, tell me when you're ready for more/
I'll stay steady to core, I can't be overturned, try and be over burned, then over churned/
look rover learned new tricks, groupies riding new dicks, theres few pricks on this site/
I pick who I like like i pick who i fight, but pick a fight if you quick or bright , and mind flickers light/
mines clicking right, all gears working oiled and greased, fears lurking, I boiled you peeps/
uncoiled the creases, ironed them flat, it my turn to rap, burn through the crap thats posted now/
hosted now, it's close to shit, how am I suppossed to hit a foe who bit? nothing arose from it/
so i'll close my fists, wait patiently here cause hate stationed me here on this clean floor/
I may seem sore from being in tr's mariene corpse, come here or provide a list to redeem for this means war/
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Postby ,-,'-{Bar}-',-, » Aug 18th, '06, 00:54

O.M.G thommas :worship: :worship: excellent :worship: really good :D :worship: loved it :D
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Postby katastrophe » Aug 18th, '06, 01:38

damn man. thats shits really good. nice job
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Postby ThomasAguanis » Aug 18th, '06, 03:35

thanks a lot for the comments guys. its really appreaciated.

think i should audio it in the future?
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Postby katastrophe » Aug 18th, '06, 03:49

ThomasAguanis wrote:think i should audio it in the future?


hell yea u should. that shit would be tight
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Postby stevethetruth » Aug 18th, '06, 03:57

katastrophe wrote:
ThomasAguanis wrote:think i should audio it in the future?


hell yea u should. that shit would be tight


i agree you should def audio this i want to hear it
cause you fucking ripped it once agian good job man :D
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Postby ThomasAguanis » Aug 18th, '06, 04:02

steverocks88 wrote:
katastrophe wrote:
hell yea u should. that shit would be tight


i agree you should def audio this i want to hear it
cause you fucking ripped it once agian good job man :D


ok thanks guys. i'll try to find a beat for it in a couple days when i want to do it and i'll post it when it's done.

thanks for the feedback
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Postby stevethetruth » Aug 18th, '06, 04:05

ThomasAguanis wrote:
steverocks88 wrote:
katastrophe wrote:
hell yea u should. that shit would be tight


i agree you should def audio this i want to hear it
cause you fucking ripped it once agian good job man :D


ok thanks guys. i'll try to find a beat for it in a couple days when i want to do it and i'll post it when it's done.

thanks for the feedback


no prob and i hope everything between you and your girlfriend gets better
keep your head up man keep your head up.....
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Postby Evil_Deedz666 » Aug 18th, '06, 05:05

thats was DUMB!!!!! :tounge2:























Hehehehe im jus kidding ;)
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Postby ThomasAguanis » Aug 18th, '06, 20:26

steverocks88 wrote:no prob and i hope everything between you and your girlfriend gets better
keep your head up man keep your head up.....


thanks man and it's gettin there...

Evil_Deedz666 wrote:thats was DUMB!!!!! :tounge2:
Hehehehe im jus kidding ;)
Keep It Up Kid :happy:

ummm thanks :confusion:
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Postby ThomasAguanis » Aug 21st, '06, 21:50

anyone have any suggustions on what beat this should go on?
im trying to find one now and can't seem to find the right one
so i figured people would give suggustions maybe
i'll try it out on the suggusted ones and see what works.
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