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Postby ,-,'-{Bar}-',-, » Aug 18th, '06, 18:39

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today when i talked to you , you acted like everything was ok ,
forgetting about last night when we chated away ,
you acted like we hadnt said what we did ,
you acting like a little kid ,
listen to what im telling you its true, remember what ive already told you,
but again you just go yeh a know ,
why why the fuck cant i let go ,
get out of my life fuck off , i dont want you anymore , i wanne close the door ,
destroy ma feelings and say fuck the world ,
coz you are not the only girl , get the fuck out am head , but instead ,
you stay sitting in the back of me head , you box poped up the other day im like is this is whats she gonni say ,
you asking if im ok , like you care ,
i want you to get ate by a grizly bear , coz i h8 that i love you ,
but more more i h8 that you dont show me love too
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Postby .Giorgo. » Aug 18th, '06, 18:56

This is really great, it's starts me thinking. You song, it's a real story of me.
I've had a relation just like this. Really good dude, nice rhyme.
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Postby ,-,'-{Bar}-',-, » Aug 18th, '06, 18:58

.Giorgo. wrote:This is really great, it's starts me thinking. You song, it's a real story of me.
I've had a relation just like this. Really good dude, nice rhyme.


thx :D i got a realeshonship like it right now lots of my stuff is based on it at the moment
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Postby Rae » Aug 18th, '06, 19:04

aww thats really good! i kinda understand what ur sayin in that b/c my relationship with my bf is the same way. but i cant stand up 2 him and say anything ... but it sounds like u dont have a problem doin that ... lol ... but yeah real nice!
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Postby ,-,'-{Bar}-',-, » Aug 18th, '06, 19:22

MarshellBM wrote:aww thats really good! i kinda understand what ur sayin in that b/c my relationship with my bf is the same way. but i cant stand up 2 him and say anything ... but it sounds like u dont have a problem doin that ... lol ... but yeah real nice!


is basically i love her but i dont wanne coz its my ex girfreind and she got a new b/f but sometimes when we talk she tells me she still has strong feelings about me n stuff its weird
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Postby Rae » Aug 18th, '06, 19:26

oh ... i went there that with someone ... named cal ... wow he gets on my nerves! lol sorry that happened 2 u! :'(

you'll get over her ... or find someone else ... i promise ... b/c i know i did in time ... lol :D
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Postby ,-,'-{Bar}-',-, » Aug 18th, '06, 19:31

MarshellBM wrote:oh ... i went there that with someone ... named cal ... wow he gets on my nerves! lol sorry that happened 2 u! :'(

you'll get over her ... or find someone else ... i promise ... b/c i know i did in time ... lol :D


thx :D :D
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Postby Rae » Aug 18th, '06, 19:37

no problem ! :D
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Postby stevethetruth » Aug 18th, '06, 20:00

deep shit man

keep it up your getting better and better everytime i see something new from new

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Postby ,-,'-{Bar}-',-, » Aug 18th, '06, 20:11

steverocks88 wrote:deep shit man

keep it up your getting better and better everytime i see something new from new

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thx man :D
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