You'll Want Me

[Rae]

My heart,
My heart is strong willed,
And is wanted by lots of people,
Then i stop and pick out tha best person i can think of,
Once i find this very special person of mine,
I try to look very devine,
Once i boost my apperance up,
Then i practice my strutt,
Hopeing if i swing my hips side to side,
You might get a glimpse of that big booty of mine,
After i walk by,
I can feel your eyes moving up my spine,
Not that i mind,
After all i want your body close to mine,
You walk up to me,
So we're face to face,
All you have to do is take one taste,
And you'll see that my heart is full of gold,
Do you think you can take control.


What do you think of this one? feed back would be great! i tried not to make it such a love poem like most of my other ones are.

[,-,'-{Bar}-',-,]

nice i like

hopeing if i swing my hips side to side,
you might get a glimpse of that big booty of mine,
after i walk by,
i can feel your eyes moving up my spine,
not that i mind,
after all i want your body close to mine,

great work on all of it keep it up

[Rae]

lol thanx ... i wrote it lastnite and i read it 2 my friend markus ... he was like "ohhhh" b/c he is obsesseded with my big booty. (with all big bootys actually) lol ... but yeah thanx 4 tha feedback!

[stevethetruth]

Once i find this very special person of mine,
I try to look very devine,

Hopeing if i swing my hips side to side,
You might get a glimpse of that big booty of mine,

So we're face to face,
All you have to do is take one taste,

awesome!!!!

i loved these lines the most
the rhymeing was wicked good
KEEP IT UP!!

[Rae]

thanx ... that one is one of my favorites that i've wrote ... lol ... (i recorded it in my sexy voice on my fone ... lol ... it sounds really good ... lol)

[stevethetruth]

thanx ... that one is one of my favorites that i've wrote ... lol ... (i recorded it in my sexy voice on my fone ... lol ... it sounds really good ... lol)

hmmm i want to hear it!!

when are you gonna start recording on the computer???
cause you should start doing it..

[Rae]

i still havent found my mic yet ... so i think im get a new one ... so hopefully as soon as i get that mic. lol

[stevethetruth]

i still havent found my mic yet ... so i think im get a new one ... so hopefully as soon as i get that mic. lol

cool

[,-,'-{Bar}-',-,]

i still havent found my mic yet ... so i think im get a new one ... so hopefully as soon as i get that mic. lol

i said this to steve and ill say it to you try using your speakers to see if they can record alot do lol you just dont knwo it lol

[stevethetruth]

i still havent found my mic yet ... so i think im get a new one ... so hopefully as soon as i get that mic. lol

i said this to steve and ill say it to you try using your speakers to see if they can record alot do lol you just dont knwo it lol

yep right now i'm using my headphones to record lmao!!!

[Rae]

i still havent found my mic yet ... so i think im get a new one ... so hopefully as soon as i get that mic. lol

i said this to steve and ill say it to you try using your speakers to see if they can record alot do lol you just dont knwo it lol

lol ... i'll try ... but my speakers suck ... so i dout it ... but i dunno ... lol thanx

[Rae]

ok ... this is gonna sound really blonde but ... how do u find out if ur speakers record? ... gosh im so clueless ...

[.Giorgo.]

About the headphones : Go To Start -> All Programs -> Accecoires And Extras ..
There must be something like : Voice Recorder ( a red circle). Open that.
If you can record than can u record true you headphones.

Offtopic : Are you blond then .

About the writing stuff :
This is 1 of you best stuff. I liked it very much.
And nice rhymes . I have lots of lots respect for you .

[Rae]

thank you for tellin me how to do that ... know i know that my speakers do not record ... but yeah ... lol ... thank you

off topic: no i am not fully blonde (i have dark brown hair with blonde highlights) lol

thankyou ... this is one of my favs. too...

thanx 4 havin respect 4 me ... i have respect 4 u too!