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[Real] Another Mistake

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[Real] Another Mistake

Postby .Giorgo. » Aug 19th, '06, 22:06

Another Mistake, this is happening real. Ive did about 25 minutes.
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[Chorus]
I tought she was the one, but she didn't.
But hey, keep up, It was one time..
[Chorus]

It's started about a month ago,,..
and today, my life, i hated myself.
I hooked up a girl, i tought she was the one.
I really want to shut her up, with a gun.

I loved her, I eat with here, i hugged her.
Whe were togheter, whe where.
But then, i heard from a friend that she was cheating me.
My whole life was filled black, i've hitted my knee.

Then she came to me, Hey it's nothing.
Nothing ? She said that it was one time.
She said ; Is it such a big crime ?
Fuck you, i never wanna see you.

You've hurted me, i hate you.
I gave you my trust, my love, my time.
I don't believe in love anymore ! leave me alone.
Our relationshop is gone, understeand ? It's blown.

[Chorus]
I tought she was the one, but she didn't.
But hey, keep up, It was one time..
[Chorus]

I locked myself up, i was angry at everyone.
I was done, done, done, done ,,,!
I finished my rage on everybody.
I was hating myself, how could i've been that stupid.

I never have luck, so why with this ?
I'm so mad at her, but i can't forget her.
She keeps stucking in my mind, i want some liqueur.
I never trust anyone anymore, anyone.

I was losing al my friends, just by that Bitch.
Just get outta my head, just die, snitch.
Just get eat'n up, just drown, just get shot.
It's tuff, but you messed my life up, My friends are gone, everything is gone.
My life is a black hole, that never ends,, so bitch, search another victim.

[Chorus]
I tought she was the one, but she didn't.
But hey, keep up, It was one time..
[Chorus]
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Postby rhiannon » Aug 21st, '06, 09:53

it was good...keep workin on them...nice work :flower:
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Postby Rae » Aug 21st, '06, 16:36

aww that was good! like i said you keep gettin better and better. Is that your 1st song? well anyways i liked it ... u just gotta keep practicing! keep it up :D
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