Mockingbord or When I'm Gone ?

[gutawafang]

my mum is an idiot too
she (most off topic thing ever)

I mean, it's still on topic if it's still about the song right?

[mdemaz]

m8 i dun wanna argue

ps when im gone sux

[Raul]

Somebody explain to me the hate towards the Sweden line? It's because he didn't make multis and he rhymes Sweden with Sweden?

It fits the message he is passing throughout the damn song, I don't understand how could anyone dislike When I'm Gone

[yoda you can call me]

both are pretty corny but at least mockingbird is written well

[csw621]

does raw emotion mean nothing to some of you?

[mdemaz]

not really if the execution is bad

[Raul]

does raw emotion mean nothing to some of you?

[mdemaz]

well when im gone honestly isnt really the worst thing ever but its a shame that it had to happen

once you get older you realize that shit is bad and you have to accept it

it will happen to you guys one day

[Him Shadow]

two great personal songs, I think I like When I'm Gone more (dope music video btw), I remember hearing Mockingbird for the first time, I really liked it, it sounded like anythin' he made before

[mdemaz]

man i feel like this thread has been made like 12 times before

i don't even care anymore i fucked with wig so much when it dropped but it just didnt age well

[Snakebeast]

Somebody explain to me the hate towards the Sweden line? It's because he didn't make multis and he rhymes Sweden with Sweden?

It fits the message he is passing throughout the damn song, I don't understand how could anyone dislike When I'm Gone

Because they're the definition of filler lines? It's basically like saying "but i'm here, how did you get here?" Do you understand how stupid that sounds?

[csw621]

Somebody explain to me the hate towards the Sweden line? It's because he didn't make multis and he rhymes Sweden with Sweden?

It fits the message he is passing throughout the damn song, I don't understand how could anyone dislike When I'm Gone

Because they're the definition of filler lines? It's basically like saying "but i'm here, how did you get here?" Do you understand how stupid that sounds?

...he was dying...

I agree with raul completely here

[Snakebeast]

Somebody explain to me the hate towards the Sweden line? It's because he didn't make multis and he rhymes Sweden with Sweden?

It fits the message he is passing throughout the damn song, I don't understand how could anyone dislike When I'm Gone

Because they're the definition of filler lines? It's basically like saying "but i'm here, how did you get here?" Do you understand how stupid that sounds?

...he was dying...

I agree with raul completely here

I was under the impression that the entire song was a dream. And he wasn't even dying during that part of the dream.

[Raul]

itt we have:

''When I'm Gone lacks multis, raw emotion doesn't affect me at all. Let's call the song trash"

[classthe_king]

itt we have:

''When I'm Gone lacks multis, raw emotion doesn't affect me at all. Let's call the song trash"

No it's just incredibly lazy and poor song writing. Emotion ≠ good when the emotion is about as deep as a puddle. There's nothing even remotely noteworthy or interesting that happens in When I'm Gone. Anyone in the creative writing section could have written it and it can't be saved by technical prowess either like most of Eminem's bad lyricism because it was written in the pill days