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Jumping Out the Gym/Getting Buzzed (Collab)

Postby shadyblogger » Jun 24th, '14, 03:59

LOF: viewtopic.php?f=24&t=171484

Beat: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=eCsjrn52LIc

Just Silver:

Jumping out the gym bud up off the stem
Coming round like a circle rap Clark Kent
Spark until im dead , you talking to them feds
Smack you upside the head, foreheads red
Forming the bread,like im fuckin sunbeam
Coming around with the beamer with my young team
Hustling to get the work with no cuffing
Just like long sleeves, the bong makes me wheeze
Look who it fucking is the rap Hercules, black nah pardon me
White skins the recipe, extra crispy I burn the pages mentally
I rave regularly, roll out like luda , roll up the Buddha the size of a ruler
Thats a twelve inch, boy are we selfish you're bitch like a shellfish
Imma re up boy shit yea we sell quick,
Drinking on melon gin, becoming a felon again
Don't want the shit to happen it's just how It comes to end
Setting a hundred trends the hundreds on the head

Blogs McGooch:

Jumping out the gym with a bottle of gin
Sipping on this wonderful tonic again
Popping another klonopin feeling demonic again
Maybe I'll have sex with the naked mannequin
I'll never be able to kick this shit like Landon Donovan
I'm addicted but I feel like I've got to win over this shot of Henn-
essy and be the realest MC
But it's so hard to be on top of the beat
When you are as drunk as me
And feeling as low as you can be, gotta grieve, gotta see the truth of my addiction, gotta see the truth of my affliction
Making in my mistakes diction
Oh wait that's syntax, whatever I don't give crap
Shit, I meant to say give a shit, wait now that's diction
Shit whatever I don't give a shit homie just relax
And sit back while I crack a six pack and a pack of Tic Tacs
Shit I'll stop drinking scotch the day I spit a verse that's wick-wack
I ain't lying bitch you know I only spit facts
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Re: Jumping Out the Gym/Getting Buzzed (Collab)

Postby Just Silver » Jun 25th, '14, 02:41

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Re: Jumping Out the Gym/Getting Buzzed (Collab)

Postby shadyblogger » Jun 25th, '14, 14:43

Just Silver wrote:Bump
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Re: Jumping Out the Gym/Getting Buzzed (Collab)

Postby Just Silver » Jun 25th, '14, 21:26

Blogs McGooch wrote:
Just Silver wrote:Bump
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Re: Jumping Out the Gym/Getting Buzzed (Collab)

Postby shadyblogger » Jun 25th, '14, 22:04

Well that was disappointing... No feedback. One of these days I think I'll write a verse about how hardly anybody gives feedback in creative writing posts.
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Re: Jumping Out the Gym/Getting Buzzed (Collab)

Postby Just Silver » Jun 25th, '14, 22:32

Blogs McGooch wrote:Well that was disappointing... No feedback. One of these days I think I'll write a verse about how hardly anybody gives feedback in creative writing posts.

Already did that lol
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Re: Jumping Out the Gym/Getting Buzzed (Collab)

Postby shadyblogger » Jun 25th, '14, 22:37

Just Silver wrote:
Blogs McGooch wrote:Well that was disappointing... No feedback. One of these days I think I'll write a verse about how hardly anybody gives feedback in creative writing posts.

Already did that lol


You did?! Which one?
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Re: Jumping Out the Gym/Getting Buzzed (Collab)

Postby Just Silver » Jun 25th, '14, 22:52

Blogs McGooch wrote:
Just Silver wrote:
Blogs McGooch wrote:Well that was disappointing... No feedback. One of these days I think I'll write a verse about how hardly anybody gives feedback in creative writing posts.

Already did that lol


You did?! Which one?

Im not sure it was a while back
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Re: Jumping Out the Gym/Getting Buzzed (Collab)

Postby cement » Jun 25th, '14, 23:09

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Re: Jumping Out the Gym/Getting Buzzed (Collab)

Postby shadyblogger » Jun 25th, '14, 23:42

@Just Silver oh ok

@cement feedback?
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Re: Jumping Out the Gym/Getting Buzzed (Collab)

Postby Excita » Jun 26th, '14, 19:19

McGooch, just sayin' but you sound so fucking influenced by Em. :D
Nice job, guys. :y:
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Re: Jumping Out the Gym/Getting Buzzed (Collab)

Postby Just Silver » Jun 26th, '14, 20:42

Thanks guy
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Re: Jumping Out the Gym/Getting Buzzed (Collab)

Postby shadyblogger » Jun 26th, '14, 22:22

excitaz wrote:McGooch, just sayin' but you sound so fucking influenced by Em. :D
Nice job, guys. :y:


Haha thanks bro
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Re: Jumping Out the Gym/Getting Buzzed (Collab)

Postby Dewey Decimal » Jun 26th, '14, 23:18

Just Silver , Shit was tight. and Blogs deff got potential


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Re: Jumping Out the Gym/Getting Buzzed (Collab)

Postby shadyblogger » Jun 26th, '14, 23:26

Dewey Decimal wrote:Just Silver , Shit was tight. and Blogs deff got potential


Keep writing


Thanks man :y:
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