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Its Was Your Call

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Its Was Your Call

Postby Rae » Aug 21st, '06, 17:24

when you walk out tha door,
dont bother coming back,
becuz i wont trust you no more,
and whats tha point of havin a relationship where you cant trust tha other,
that would be pointless and a waste of time,
but i dont care anymore,
becuz i cant bear it anymore,
so you betta go catch that whore,
that gave u that hickie,
you're no longer with me,
you had your chance,
and you chose to throw it away,
so you left me speechless with nothin else to say,
now you've gotten your way,
your a free man,
now you can scream HURRAY!

i know i know its not that great ... but ... i posted it anyways!
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Postby stevethetruth » Aug 21st, '06, 19:41

i agree with like the first 5 lines but the rest is just pointed at one sex which is mine lol
if that makes sense

i like it :D
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Postby Rae » Aug 21st, '06, 19:45

thanx ... i didnt think it was that good ... but its good 2 see that someone liked it :D
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Postby ,-,'-{Bar}-',-, » Aug 21st, '06, 19:57

i like this one aswell

becuz i cant bear it anymore,
so you betta go catch that whore,
that gave u that hickie,
you're no longer with me,


i like those lines alot :D nice work
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Postby Rae » Aug 21st, '06, 20:02

Bar wrote:i like this one aswell

becuz i cant bear it anymore,
so you betta go catch that whore,
that gave u that hickie,
you're no longer with me,


i like those lines alot :D nice work


thanx :D i really didnt think this one was any good ... :unsure:
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