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Postby Coccoa » Sep 27th, '05, 22:35

Yup yup yup...i am working on a track right now, got the beat from 300 Shots and i am writing my own 1:30 min verse to do a lil mix. Here's the lyrics to check and judge if it's cool or what.

Go to war in the street, never been the one to fuck with\
Fuck with the leaf, never been the one to chill with\
Go to fight with a slug, you fronting like a thug\
When i change the mag, put your ass in a bodybag\
Predicate felon guarrantee 2 sell, holla to the thug coming out the jail\
Gave my dawg a promise never fail, cuz if i fail he be happy like a fag in jail\
Keep your enemies close and your family far, 40 slugs in the game bitch get in my car\
Ride down the street never stop fronting, rhyme at the beat never stop gunning\
When the guns come out the shit is on, pull the gat and the spray the fucking caps or be gone\
When shit hits the fan be winner or dead, scream god forgive me on your fucking deathbed\
I am a mafia click all by my own, my 45 ACP gonna smoke u phony\
'fore you meet my Berretta meet her 4 shizzie, caps are ruthless bitch so take it eazy\
We do the other way the bloody way, reenact Dre Day, that's the shit 2 say\
Did 16 bars homie just for fun, when i come back you be sweating, staring at my gun\

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Postby Coccoa » Sep 27th, '05, 22:55

I am working on it. Some instrumentals i downloaded cuz i am far too lazy to make my own :P and i am currently on the writing stage.

This is is gonna be far too small tho. Hardly 2:20 mins :(
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Postby Sunni » Sep 27th, '05, 23:29

It's cool. Do you have a mic so you can record it on the computer?
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Postby Coccoa » Sep 28th, '05, 13:35

Of course i do. 5 microphones (kinda crappy tho), a Yamaha MX 12/4 mixconsole and quite a few programs, namely Cool Edit Pro 2, Fruity Loops 5 and ....i think i have Acid 5 Pro somewhere, never worked on it tho.
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Postby Tomega » Sep 28th, '05, 14:22

use ejay
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Postby HAYZI » Sep 28th, '05, 14:23

ejays crap its all samples and hes already got fruity loops which is ten times better
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Postby Tomega » Sep 28th, '05, 14:40

yes ejay got samples, but i dont use them. i make own sounds and edit them till they fit my rap.
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Postby HAYZI » Sep 28th, '05, 14:42

well the two tunes i heard of yours were both with samples cos id heard my mate use them when he used ejay
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Postby Tomega » Sep 28th, '05, 14:44

yeah that's right, but i also got without. but i must admit, ejay is meant for standard samples.
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Postby HAYZI » Sep 28th, '05, 14:47

thats what im sayin
ejay is a game to play with not actual production software
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Postby Tomega » Sep 28th, '05, 14:50

i dont agree, but that doesn't matter :wink:
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Postby AspirinE » Sep 28th, '05, 16:40

LOL can anyone upload ejay for me

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coz i threw away my old cd about 3 months ago :cry:
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Postby Tomega » Sep 28th, '05, 16:53

use bitlord
and http://www.isohunt.com to search hiphop ejay 5
Then load the file u downloaded from http://www.isohunt.com (1kb) and open it in bitlord.
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Postby Coccoa » Sep 28th, '05, 17:50

E-Jay? Jesus...you cant actually produce with that. My lil bro (the reincarnation of Biggie Smalls, not cuz of the skills, but cuz of the size) used it long ago, now he is doing his own productions on FL Studio.

But moi... :oops: well let's say that mixing with acapellas and instrumentals is what i really like. (A very crappy excuse for stealing Dre's instrumentals and rapping all over them :oops: :oops: :oops: )
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Postby Tomega » Sep 28th, '05, 18:04

Ejay aint crap!!!!
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