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Just a quick rhyme for old times.

Postby 4D » Aug 26th, '06, 19:24

I used to be active used to reactin to fools who be wackin,
I used to refuse to be passive, infact to be cool is attractive,
But, fools who dispatch diss after diss, kiss my shoe with a fat lip,
I`m bruisin with ass kicks when foes choose to be frantic,
Dudes too pedantic to see the rue of said antics,
Food of red ant sticks to my shoe like semantics,
Your goo is some stank shit and semantics is Meaning,
Meanin' the meanin' of words speakin' in language
You wank bitch, get left weepin' bleedin' in Anguish,
Leavin you vanquished I vanish to banish another day
Man is ur mother gay? Your brother swears she`s the other way,
If she`s a lesbian she best be in to orgies and threesomes
Cos I need a mature whore to keep me horny till she cums,
When my seed comes it erupts n busts all over the teeth/gums,
Cos each mums got peach buns when their labelled milf,
And usually their boobs`ll be suffice to keep my cable stiff,
You could hit my dick with a grid iron stick and not dis-able it,
And this shit is a quick spit, suck dick if ya lable the fable shit!!
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Postby ,-,'-{Bar}-',-, » Aug 26th, '06, 19:27

nice work man pretty sweet rythm :D
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Postby 4D » Aug 26th, '06, 19:29

Thanks, long time since i posted a rhyme, just stretchin the old mind muscles.
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Postby AspirinE » Aug 26th, '06, 19:31

FORDIE wrote:Thanks, long time since i posted a rhyme, just stretchin the old mind muscles.


woah.. u back :shocked: Good to see... i mean good to read you.

shit was off the hook, thanx for blessing us with the rhyme. :smoking:
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Postby 4D » Aug 26th, '06, 19:40

Haha, thanks man. Won`t be online much. Just in my bro`s, writin prose, lol. My internet connection is gone in my house, so i`ll only be online sporadically.
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Postby ThomasAguanis » Aug 27th, '06, 04:19

crazy rhymes man. you still have the best shit here.
and it's good to see you back
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I still rap better than you.

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rhyme!!!

Postby °[~CHR!$~]° » Aug 27th, '06, 15:48

nice ryhme......pretty good i like it........ :happy:
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Postby 4D » Aug 29th, '06, 12:51

Thanks everyone, good to be back.....occasionally. :)
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