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Hurted Feelings

Postby .Giorgo. » Aug 28th, '06, 20:42

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Girl, U are so sweet, u are so good to me.
I have so many feelings of guilt. i used your feelings.
U learned me so much. U gave me self-confidence.
And still i am such a prick that used you.
I really don't understeand myself on some moments.

But is is that much ? i came in your room and..
I saw a letter on the table. i don't care about it.
I wanted to see you, i wanna say that i'm so sorry.
But then, i saw it, you lay there on the ground.
With a plastic bag over your head. I get a shock.

I walked to you and take the bag away.
It was too late, from that moment i hated myself.
I was thinking about my whole life, what i did to the girl.
And than i tought about the letter, i read it.
She said that she loves me, but that wasn't mutual.

She said that i was her life. and she didn't have me so..
Her life was nothing without me. If i was earlier.
If i was honest, i was just a coward. i didn't wanted to see the facts.
But i have too, i take a girl her life away, that's a human life.

I gave up my life. i was depressed, the girl trusted me.
And i used her, that's just stupid. The feelings of the girl.
It's just a human, she has flesh and blood ans a hart.
So why did i treated her like that ? .. I'm sorry ..
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Postby sinemm » Aug 28th, '06, 20:46

thats sad..i bet there are lotsa ppl who had these experiences too..thats really sad for them..
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Postby .Giorgo. » Aug 28th, '06, 20:48

I had this on my own, but a lil bit different.
I didn't hurted her.
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Postby sinemm » Aug 28th, '06, 20:50

.Giorgo. wrote:I had this on my own, but a lil bit different.
I didn't hurted her.


ooh :( .. but at least abit different..thats good..
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