Never say..

[beccababe2]

Never say I love you
If you really don't care
Never talk about feeling
If they really aren't there
Never hold my hand
If you're gonna break my heart
Never say you gone to
If you don't plan to start
Never look in to my eyes
If all you do is Lie
Never say hello
If you really mean goodbye
if you really mean forever
then say you will try
Never say forever
because it makes me cry

[rhiannon]

aww that was really good i liekd it alot well done lol

[beccababe2]

thank you...

[sinemm]

ooh some years ago i was like that..and i wrote sth like that really siit ws in turkish and thats good there are good rhymes in it well done

[.Giorgo.]

Aw I'l like it. It's a bit short but good.
Nice work .

[Rae]

wow i loved it!!!! it was sick!

good job!

[,-,'-{Bar}-',-,]

pretty nice if you shortened it down itd be a tight hook nice work

[beccababe2]

I was thinking of doing that, i just need someone to write a rap for it and i'd write another verse...lol

[,-,'-{Bar}-',-,]

I was thinking of doing that, i just need someone to write a rap for it and i'd write another verse...lol

sweet ill do it do ya do audio ?

[beccababe2]

yeah i've done it once before i could do it again. I'll get writing the verse and cutting the hook

[,-,'-{Bar}-',-,]

yeah i've done it once before i could do it again. I'll get writing the verse and cutting the hook

sweet ill have my verse within the next hour ( got to finsih this other verse im working on )