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Postby ,-,'-{Bar}-',-, » Aug 30th, '06, 03:24

see am planning my life at this age ,
coz i dont wanne rot away for days n days,
my life is a one sided record, thats the only way it plays,
untill a stand above the normal, shoot for the top ,
take a chance either i make it or i drop ,
ittl be like caged hell tryna get myself out ,
everything against, shit im used to that shout ,
nothing really changed since i hit 13 ,
My dick got bigger a grew about 3 ft ,
other than that , no one still aint gave me a chance,
am always walking with the wind against ,
like a car goin the wrong way on the m-8
in rush hour coz his wife prenant and he late ,
im just sptiting these rythmes to kill the time ,
am gonni move out make sure a have a prime ,
coz ma life is fucking up as its goin now ,
all ma mum ever does is shout and moan ,
shut up bitch am on the phone ,
a got to be serious when a spit,
a got to make sure a perfect ever style ,
mix them together then yo all be feeling it ,
ma determination is un-matched ,
the speed am gonni rise cant be catched ,
if you disagree , pour the gasoline , light the match,
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Postby .Giorgo. » Aug 30th, '06, 08:56

I wanna ligh the match :tounge2: .

Lmao. Just kiddin', Damn. This song/rap.
You think the same like me, weird. But it's very good.
There are some good rhymes in it.
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Postby ,-,'-{Bar}-',-, » Aug 30th, '06, 14:22

.Giorgo. wrote:I wanna ligh the match :tounge2: .

Lmao. Just kiddin', Damn. This song/rap.
You think the same like me, weird. But it's very good.
There are some good rhymes in it.


thanx man :D
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