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Postby ,-,'-{Bar}-',-, » Aug 30th, '06, 21:07

cgame wrote:not ur verse bar........
goergies verse


oh...lol :sweating: i was like my verse rythms :unsure: lol misuderstanding lol
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Postby C-Game » Aug 30th, '06, 21:20

Bar wrote:
cgame wrote:not ur verse bar........
goergies verse


oh...lol :sweating: i was like my verse rythms :unsure: lol misuderstanding lol


no prblem
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Postby .Giorgo. » Aug 30th, '06, 21:27

Thx for tha feedback. Yeah i'm now work on those rhyms.
But i tought this wass a song :confusion: . But on our verses.. a rap looks better.
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Postby Lo~Key » Sep 3rd, '06, 04:47

aiight not hatin here, but both the artists that dropped here could use a lil help...

tell me the point you tryin to get out N I'll add a third verse for y'all, N I could try N help ya chorus.

I know I'm new but I can write.

Only thing's that I don't have a mic so the audio won't work for me, but I'll add it just for the text version, once it's recorded y'all could take out my verse if you want.

what you say, want my help?
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