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Change Is Not Always Good

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Change Is Not Always Good

Postby Rae » Sep 4th, '06, 16:56

what would you say,
if i went away,
and became a famous star,
or a stripper at a bar,
would you still love me the same,
or would you discard me and say no way,
i wanna know if our love is strong,
becuz if not why have we been together so long,
im havin alot of douts,
becuz you actin like you control me,
and that just dont roll with me,
under no circumstances would i tell you what to do,
for the simple reason that i love you,
and i wanna be with someone who acts like themselves,
not some talking doll on a shelf,
i hope you get what im tryin to say,
i would never wanna change you,
so stop trying to change me.
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Postby rhiannon » Sep 4th, '06, 17:03

i feel that...i like it its really nice
nice work ur really good at these...u gotta gift lmao :flower:
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Postby Rae » Sep 4th, '06, 17:06

aw thanx! :D
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Postby stevethetruth » Sep 4th, '06, 17:48

not bad keep it up :D

your getting better :happy: :8)
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Postby Rae » Sep 4th, '06, 17:49

lol thanx! :D

(im havin writers block) :'(

so im not expectin this one 2 b that good! lol :D
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