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Postby ,-,'-{Bar}-',-, » Sep 5th, '06, 02:02

Me =normal
Police = Bold

yo , listen to me go , running from the po ,
bouncing down your street , po shooting with there heat ,
taking out there batons , swinging and slapping,
they gonni kill me just coz im rapping,
coz before i've even made im geting accused ,
im geting abused , im getting used ,
as there way out from doing reall police work ,
thinking im the one cozing all this hurt ,
"do you beileive me when i say im not the one you want",
"but you match the description and you look like that knida guy,
the kinda guy thats does it to see the famaly cry"
,
"yo, you got me wrong officer im not an offensive one ,i dont carry a gun"
"i dont beileive what your saying son , get in the back of the wagon , thats it done",
"fuk you" , so i run , thinking i cant go to jail im to young ,
po-po reaches for his gun BANG im done.........

just something, feedback please
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Postby stevethetruth » Sep 5th, '06, 02:21

bang....it's up your hands in cuffs
man the pol..ice suck i've had enough
i'ma rip the gun out and shoot them
and yell at everyone who ever knew them
and at the same time i'ma pray to god i don't die
i swear i won't shoot but if they do they'll be in a hearse
fuck the, first plan i had
it's sucked so much kind of like kissing ass
ok quit thinking cause another minute just passed
i gotta slow down cause i'm moving too fast
enough of this shit screw the past
i'ma kill you all with a single blast!!




ha ha bar that was pretty good i liked it
http://www.myspace.com/stevethetruth <-- my myspace add me!!
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Postby ,-,'-{Bar}-',-, » Sep 5th, '06, 02:31

were i have i seen the exact same post before :whistle: lol j/k

thx man and nice add on :D
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Postby C-Game » Sep 5th, '06, 19:43

oh shit i think the cops are huntin me on ma blocks
i got a glimpse of there badges one is 'bar' other is steve rocks
i tried to avoid them but the situation is gettin hotter
they are capturin my gang which helps me to get away as they stutter
i cant stand it any more they are gettin closer and closer
im breakin but im tryin to maintain a highlevel of composure
but one day i was cornered i reached for the gun, nuttin left to do
and bar said "man we r bunch of pimps, we want u to join the crew"


:D
nice drop bar and steve
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Postby ,-,'-{Bar}-',-, » Sep 5th, '06, 19:50

nice add on cgame :D lol and thx :D
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Postby polluted » Sep 11th, '06, 04:20

lol...
kids dreamin guns and shootin five-0.....lmao....

BAR, did u eva get busted for somin real? or u got caught for liftin candies ouuta tha shop?

lol :zipped:
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Postby ,-,'-{Bar}-',-, » Sep 11th, '06, 11:27

polluted wrote:lol...
kids dreamin guns and shootin five-0.....lmao....

BAR, did u eva get busted for somin real? or u got caught for liftin candies ouuta tha shop?

lol :zipped:


it aint a real story just for fun

and i bin chased by the police alot of times for the record
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Postby Coccoa » Sep 11th, '06, 21:02

Im with the police.
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Postby polluted » Sep 12th, '06, 05:03

Bar wrote:
polluted wrote:lol...
kids dreamin guns and shootin five-0.....lmao....

BAR, did u eva get busted for somin real? or u got caught for liftin candies ouuta tha shop?

lol :zipped:


it aint a real story just for fun

and i bin chased by the police alot of times for the record



lol.....bin chased....



mothafucka, den u ent no shit about wot its like to get busted n get tossed into GARDEAVUE....
mathafucka!!!!
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Postby ,-,'-{Bar}-',-, » Sep 12th, '06, 05:36

polluted wrote:
Bar wrote:
polluted wrote:lol...
kids dreamin guns and shootin five-0.....lmao....

BAR, did u eva get busted for somin real? or u got caught for liftin candies ouuta tha shop?

lol :zipped:


it aint a real story just for fun

and i bin chased by the police alot of times for the record



lol.....bin chased....



mothafucka, den u ent no shit about wot its like to get busted n get tossed into GARDEAVUE....
mathafucka!!!!


i love the way your writign completely changes when you tryna act all gangsta fucking bitch...i beat yo ass once so fuck up
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Postby polluted » Sep 12th, '06, 08:44

Bar wrote:
polluted wrote:
Bar wrote:
polluted wrote:lol...
kids dreamin guns and shootin five-0.....lmao....

BAR, did u eva get busted for somin real? or u got caught for liftin candies ouuta tha shop?

lol :zipped:


it aint a real story just for fun

and i bin chased by the police alot of times for the record



lol.....bin chased....



mothafucka, den u ent no shit about wot its like to get busted n get tossed into GARDEAVUE....
mathafucka!!!!


i love the way your writign completely changes when you tryna act all gangsta fucking bitch...i beat yo ass once so fuck up




bitch. i ent actin gansta, u fuckin pussy, shut u fukin mauth, kid...
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Postby ,-,'-{Bar}-',-, » Sep 12th, '06, 12:10

polluted wrote:
Bar wrote:
polluted wrote:
Bar wrote:
polluted wrote:lol...
kids dreamin guns and shootin five-0.....lmao....

BAR, did u eva get busted for somin real? or u got caught for liftin candies ouuta tha shop?

lol :zipped:


it aint a real story just for fun

and i bin chased by the police alot of times for the record



lol.....bin chased....



mothafucka, den u ent no shit about wot its like to get busted n get tossed into GARDEAVUE....
mathafucka!!!!


i love the way your writign completely changes when you tryna act all gangsta fucking bitch...i beat yo ass once so fuck up




bitch. i ent actin gansta, u fuckin pussy, shut u fukin mauth, kid...


aint you see the way you start to spell everything different when yer tryna act all gangsta n hard , "ent" n "mauth" :laughing: fucking pathetic man really
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Postby polluted » Sep 12th, '06, 12:31

Bar wrote:
polluted wrote:
Bar wrote:
polluted wrote:
Bar wrote:
polluted wrote:lol...
kids dreamin guns and shootin five-0.....lmao....

BAR, did u eva get busted for somin real? or u got caught for liftin candies ouuta tha shop?

lol :zipped:


it aint a real story just for fun

and i bin chased by the police alot of times for the record



lol.....bin chased....



mothafucka, den u ent no shit about wot its like to get busted n get tossed into GARDEAVUE....
mathafucka!!!!


i love the way your writign completely changes when you tryna act all gangsta fucking bitch...i beat yo ass once so fuck up




bitch. i ent actin gansta, u fuckin pussy, shut u fukin mauth, kid...


aint you see the way you start to spell everything different when yer tryna act all gangsta n hard , "ent" n "mauth" :laughing: fucking pathetic man really




lol pal....i really fuckin around wif my spellin like dat.....lol fuck lol)))))

fa real, I ent gangsta n never sed i was....

i simply thot u sounded pathetic wen u claimed u were chased by five-0 man...

i bin busted many timez for fightin in public n smashin some mugs up for talking shit and also for inadequate behavior in public being tottaly plastered.

u no what it feels like ot wake up all fucked up behind bars ... wen u ent got nobody to pay fine for u....

n it doesnt hev anytting to do with gangtafied kid..... lol


peace
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Postby ,-,'-{Bar}-',-, » Sep 12th, '06, 12:34

on the song i cloamed to be chased by police ive dun been chased alot n im to fast to get caught its just a song i told you it not based on anything real
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Postby polluted » Sep 12th, '06, 12:39

Bar wrote:on the song i cloamed to be chased by police ive dun been chased alot n im to fast to get caught its just a song i told you it not based on anything real


man I ent claimin i did some1 or some other crazy shit....

but ur 'bin chased and wosnt caught' sounds like u lifted some candy from the shop and was fleein from po-po man


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