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fuk this world

Postby ,-,'-{Bar}-',-, » Sep 5th, '06, 02:43

fuck this world, you piss me off,
the little things you do to tip me off,
like you tryna test me and my pateince,
dont do it again or youll end up a patiant ,
in da hospital , if you thick, i spellt it out,
you smell a shit , i spelt it out ,
im telling it straight no twists or turns,
the anger inside me, toils, twirls and burns ,
if you come near me, youll end up in a urn,
so back up bitch im taking over this world ,
im king of the animal planet,
you just the ugly mamal janet,
i dont understand what im spitting,
i dont give a shit coz its hitting,
ill just keep goin with this rythm,
till i die, curl up out of time,
your dead, you cant have a prime,
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Postby Rap Soul » Sep 5th, '06, 02:56

lol the first 2 bars are eminem.way to go
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Postby ,-,'-{Bar}-',-, » Sep 5th, '06, 03:04

Rap Soul wrote:lol the first 2 bars are eminem.way to go


huh.......when and were i made them up when i wrote this as a keystyle staright of the top of my head :confusion:
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Postby Rap Soul » Sep 5th, '06, 03:04

my bad it sounded the same but it wasnt but it was in a song. i'll let you know when i remeber but nice job
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Postby ,-,'-{Bar}-',-, » Sep 5th, '06, 03:05

Rap Soul wrote:my bad it sounded the same but it wasnt but it was in a song. i'll let you know when i remeber but nice job


ok please make sure you do
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Postby slim1 » Sep 5th, '06, 17:55

hey thats som good shit you should make more
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