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Gonna try poetry.

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Gonna try poetry.

Postby 4D » Sep 5th, '06, 19:21

I can hear the rain trickle off the glass,
Summer's expired, and it hardly arrived.
My eyes glazed i think of times gone passed,
Music blaring, 40 degrees on a summer drive,
Sweet Child O Mine was a track to remember,
Everytihng since has been forgetful in comparison,
A long hot June, seemed so far till September,
I recall my long hair, the mental picture is embarrisin`,
But we learn from our mistakes, so we`d like to think,
Grow up and mature into a man with common sense,
And the time flies by, as fast as eyes can blink,
You learn to be strong and never sit on the fence,
Be yourself, never conceal your own opinion,
Be assertive and be true to your self,
Don`t be two faced, that`s on the verge of reptilian,
Truly express yourself, before you show your life the shelf.


I know it`s shit, but, i just thought i`d try it. Just wrote it right now off the brain, so don`t kick my ass to much. :D
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Postby sinemm » Sep 5th, '06, 19:28

thats niice..like it.. :)
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