FoRgIvE Me....

by **sinemm** » Sep 5th, '06, 14:47

leave feedback pls..

FORGIVE ME

i had been listening the sound of the falling rain..
i knew all i need was a rainbow..i was jus prayin..
everybody shutted up when you called me name..
and the big hazel eyes helped sth to change in my brain..

i was like dreamin when you held my hand..
if u said i

by **slim1** » Sep 5th, '06, 18:16

that is brilliant man

by 4D » Sep 5th, '06, 18:23

^Did you even read it, if Sinemm is a man he`s gay fool. :zipped:

Very touching, i sense it`s straight from the heart, you`re to be admired for sharing your feelings like that.

Lovely Poem!!

by **sinemm** » Sep 5th, '06, 18:31

FORDIE wrote:^Did you even read it, if Sinemm is a man he`s gay fool.

Very touching, i sense it`s straight from the heart, you`re to be admired for sharing your feelings like that.

Lovely Poem!!

yeah FORDIE is right im a girl.

and thnx FORIDE

&

that is brilliant man

thnx tho

by **,-,'-{Bar}-',-,** » Sep 5th, '06, 19:18

real nice...emotional with nice rythming keep it up

by **sinemm** » Sep 5th, '06, 19:29

Bar wrote:real nice...emotional with nice rythming keep it up

thnx bar..ok ima keep it up

lol

by **Hoopz** » Sep 6th, '06, 22:04

Great job. Reallllly deep. Im sorry if its based on true tho

by **sinemm** » Sep 6th, '06, 22:10

Hoopz wrote::flower:

Great job. Reallllly deep. Im sorry if its based on true tho

thank you..

well nearly based yea..

by **BaZZ** » Sep 6th, '06, 22:15

oooo thats a very nice poem... very emotional too... good job there

by **sinemm** » Sep 7th, '06, 14:55

SliM_880 wrote:oooo thats a very nice poem... very emotional too... good job there

ooo thans alot

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by **Flamez** » Sep 7th, '06, 15:20

really nice emotional poem u did there girl...nice work

by **sinemm** » Sep 7th, '06, 15:44

Flamez wrote:really nice emotional poem u did there girl...nice work

thank you..!

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