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Postby stevethetruth » Sep 10th, '06, 03:10

Yo who
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Postby katastrophe » Sep 10th, '06, 03:40

nice job steve. i really like it
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Postby ,-,'-{Bar}-',-, » Sep 10th, '06, 03:57

really nice lyrics man smart rythms and hooks real catchyi :D your getting better :D
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Postby stevethetruth » Sep 10th, '06, 04:02

Bar wrote:really nice lyrics man smart rythms and hooks real catchyi :D your getting better :D


really thanks man cause i thought this was one of my "subpar tracks" lol and yeah i too think i hook is wiked catchy i can't get it out of my head lmao

thanks for the feedback (both of ya)
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Postby BaZZ » Sep 10th, '06, 04:20

coool i like it alot man...
"Hard hearted beast with a jaw full of meat
Engulfed in a feast while you starve at his feet
He toss you the least little portion of a piece
To the floor and expect you to rejoice when you eat" - Brother Ali
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Postby stevethetruth » Sep 10th, '06, 04:24

SliM_880 wrote:coool i like it alot man...


thanks for the feedback i'm glad you like it :D
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Postby stevethetruth » Sep 11th, '06, 00:59

feedback please :)
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Postby TiFFany08 » Sep 11th, '06, 01:45

i like its pretty good
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Postby Flamez » Sep 11th, '06, 01:47

yo man thats nice, i like it its good :8)
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Postby stevethetruth » Sep 11th, '06, 02:24

thanks for the feedback both of ya :D :D
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Postby stevethetruth » Sep 12th, '06, 23:03

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