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my first rap song i ever wrote. funny as hell, trust me

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my first rap song i ever wrote. funny as hell, trust me

Postby katastrophe » Sep 13th, '06, 03:39

ok...heres the rap song that got me started rapping. now i know i came a long way from this rhyme but its funny as fuck and i know you guys will laugh.

enjoy:

Yo,
Yo yo yo,
I hate homos,
I think I can rap,
But I just cant,
I just go on stage and talk through the mic,
I grab on my nut sack whenever I feel like,
I hold my pants to keep from fallin,
Wtf does it mean to be ballin?,
U gotta stay pimpin,
Y u trippin?,
Dawg get off my turf,
JD u like a motherfucking smurf,
Wut does it mean to wear a flag,
Are u a fag?,
Well I don
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Postby Logann » Sep 13th, '06, 03:42

sounds like somthing any white person first tryin to rap would write, so not all tht bad.. lol jus lookie I aint a quueer.. I aint a quuer.. lol :p
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Postby Inches » Sep 13th, '06, 04:09

haha
its probably better than my first freestyle
check it in the call out section its
"newbs in the crib?"
im pretty bad lol
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Postby BaZZ » Sep 13th, '06, 05:38

hahahahahaha thats funny shit... :D
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Engulfed in a feast while you starve at his feet
He toss you the least little portion of a piece
To the floor and expect you to rejoice when you eat" - Brother Ali
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Postby ,-,'-{Bar}-',-, » Sep 13th, '06, 13:39

pretty funny man :laughing:
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Postby Suppa » Sep 14th, '06, 17:33

haha playa nice shit , no doubt , funny ,
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Postby Flamez » Sep 14th, '06, 22:57

lol haha funny man
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