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This is Fate ... By: The Truth and Rae

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This is Fate ... By: The Truth and Rae

Postby Rae » Sep 14th, '06, 22:12

This is Fate

(The Truth)
Rae your like a rubber band your cling to my hand,
I manage to push you away but still you come back the very next day,

(Rae)
Why do u keep pushing me away?
Because every time we talk we both have so much to say,
and at the end of the day,
you always say i love u in every way,

(The Truth)
It ticks me off every joke you say,
You think it doesn't offend me but it does ok,
I'm sick of these games I ain't playing,

(Rae)
Every joke about you is because I love you,
I cant stop thinkin of you,
I think about you 24/7 and when I do it feels like I
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Postby ,-,'-{Bar}-',-, » Sep 14th, '06, 22:50

really kool :worship: great work by both of you :d you BETTER do audio :D
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Postby Flamez » Sep 14th, '06, 23:02

that was cool, like what both of u did, it was nice :8)
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Postby katastrophe » Sep 15th, '06, 00:14

haha...i like it how u did it kinda like a duet type thing :sweating: its nice though. i really like it. good job guys
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Postby Rae » Sep 15th, '06, 00:44

thank you everyone! i appericate the comments! :D
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Postby BaZZ » Sep 15th, '06, 02:03

thats awesome! :shock:
hope u do an audio bout it... :unsure:
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Postby stevethetruth » Sep 15th, '06, 04:28

yeah lol hopfully we do an audio she just has to get a microphone lol
but yeah thanks for the comments all of you guys :D
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Postby ThomasAguanis » Sep 15th, '06, 04:38

pretty good...at times a little repetitive but other than that it was nice. story line was alright. could have been better in parts but both of you did a great job. keep it up guys(and girl)

and an audio would be intresting to hear.
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Postby stevethetruth » Sep 15th, '06, 05:09

ThomasAguanis wrote:pretty good...at times a little repetitive but other than that it was nice. story line was alright. could have been better in parts but both of you did a great job. keep it up guys(and girl)

and an audio would be intresting to hear.


cool thanks for the feedback man :worship:

and yeah i hope we are able to do an audio lol
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Postby Rae » Sep 15th, '06, 20:51

thanx 4 tha feedback! i know it repetitive in some parts ... but we started it as a game ... then steve was like we should turn it into a song ... so thats what it ended up being...

if we knew that we were gonna make a song ... i think it woulda been a little better. :D
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