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Postby DOPE » Sep 23rd, '06, 10:40

removed lyrics


cuz only got one feedback






*sticks up middle finger*
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Postby Coccoa » Sep 23rd, '06, 12:17

Hmmm....and i was damn near feeling you.
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Postby DOPE » Sep 23rd, '06, 12:23

Hmmm....and i was damn near feeling you.


?

dont get what u said,, was that a compliment or was that not a compliment
"It's amazing that the amount of news that happens in the world every day always just exactly fits the newspaper."

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Make you satanistic
Make you take the pistol to your face
N place the clip N cock it back
N let it go until your brains are rippin out your skull so bad
To sew you back would be a waste of stitches

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Postby Coccoa » Sep 23rd, '06, 20:13

It's a compliment.

To remind you, my casual comment on others is "fuck off u suck bitch", so think of it. I was damn near feeling you so yeah, u did good.
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Postby DOPE » Sep 25th, '06, 08:33

It's a compliment.

To remind you, my casual comment on others is "fuck off u suck bitch", so think of it. I was damn near feeling you so yeah, u did good.


oh aite

thanks for the feedback





40 views only one dude gives feedback

the fuck??
"It's amazing that the amount of news that happens in the world every day always just exactly fits the newspaper."

My basic disk will make you take a razor to your wrist
Make you satanistic
Make you take the pistol to your face
N place the clip N cock it back
N let it go until your brains are rippin out your skull so bad
To sew you back would be a waste of stitches

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Postby Restlesswon » Sep 25th, '06, 10:47

aye bruh post the shit i wana see haha
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