words i've been dying to say (not finished yet)

[stevethetruth]

I wrote this to the rengeade beat

check it out and please leave some feed



Verse 1:
They really hate me now cause of what I did
I became another same old rapping white kid
They getting sick of me they want me to leave
They never want me on to be on this tv
People despise me everywhere I fucking go
I

[Inzanity]

it was pretty good. I like the concept of it. I thought the course was pretty dope too. Good on job on this.

[stevethetruth]

cool thanks for the feedback

[stevethetruth]

you know......some..........feedback would be nice

[stevethetruth]

if you say fuck killa i kill you

ok sir.....

FUCK KILLA !!!!!!!!!

[stevethetruth]

...*starts rap war

*waits for gunshots to start* *looks at watch*

[stevethetruth]

...*starts rap war

*waits for gunshots to start* *looks at watch*

gunshots? 16 bars its over killa wins the title and the crowd go wild ....i did it before

idk lol what i was thinking when i said gunshots
but yeah you'd probably beat me badly in a battle

[stevethetruth]

im playin man nice work lol

yeah i thought so lmao your always typing random posts lol

thanks man

[stevethetruth]

come on PEOPLE LEAVE FEEDBACK!!

[soperman005]

i like it.. the rhyming pattern is simple, yet ur saying a lot

[stevethetruth]

i like it.. the rhyming pattern is simple, yet ur saying a lot

cool lol thanks man

[Inches]

the rhymes kinda reminded me of eminem

[katastrophe]

im bored as fuck right now so ill do my rare, real feedback:

They really hate me now cause of what I did
I became another same old rapping white kid
They getting sick of me they want me to leave
They never want me on to be on this tv
People despise me everywhere I fucking(dont really need the "fucking") go
I

[Inches]

im bored as fuck right now so ill do my rare, real feedback:

They really hate me now cause of what I did
I became another same old rapping white kid
They getting sick of me they want me to leave
They never want me on to be on this tv
People despise me everywhere I fucking(dont really need the "fucking") go
I

Inches

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[stevethetruth]

sweet kata thanks for the feed


and yeah this song was kind of influenced by em lol