Clarky wrote:I've got an appetite for rappin' tight and this is only a snack,
I'll blow up you fast like a plane bomb flown in Iraq,
Don't be holding me back if you wanna keep your shoulders intact,
Even if you're holdin' a mac you're goin home cold in a bag,
Roll me a fat blunt get higher than a mad cunt in a bike stunt,
You'll get less pussy than a man named Mike on a dyke hunt,
After we fight coz I don't like to finish at strike one,
You'll be owned for days, blown away like a kite that a tyke wants,
Write continiousley through the night and only pick three lines to use,
These rhymes I choose will show me at my prime so I won't be in line to lose,
Be sublime and prove that I can cruise against the competition,
It's a monster mission but it's worth it when you know they wanna listen,
I'm fond of dissin' so be cautious of what you say, I'll roast ya's,
I'm fuckin' ferocious , Leave you lookin' like you was cookin in toasters,
The most rough when it comes to beefin',
Leave you deep in the ground to be found with worms that creep in while your sleepin'.
Feedback plz. Ima try take into consideration what everyone says, then, proborbly re write it to make it better.
the skill is definately there clarky and I wouldnt change your lyrics now, id just think of this for the future - but I would say less per bar/line to stop you rushing yourself in audios, that with what ive bin telling you about audioing, should make u come on leaps and bounds because your skill obviously has done.
