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Postby rhiannon » Oct 4th, '06, 17:24

Sketching hearts and shooting starts thinkin of your love,
Summer nights, sunset cloud
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Postby ,-,'-{Bar}-',-, » Oct 4th, '06, 20:20

its koolness :smoking: really nice :D
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Postby .Giorgo. » Oct 4th, '06, 20:24

I like it. It's really nice, pretty the same feelings as me.
U should record it. If u want i'l make a another verse for it. (if u wanna record it).
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Postby rhiannon » Oct 4th, '06, 21:23

.Giorgo. wrote:I like it. It's really nice, pretty the same feelings as me.
U should record it. If u want i'l make a another verse for it. (if u wanna record it).

i have no mic but thanx :flower:
an thanx bar :flower:
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Postby rhiannon » Oct 5th, '06, 09:35

an wut rap?lmao i cant...thanx anyways clarky :flower:
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Postby BaZZ » Oct 5th, '06, 10:23

i like it alot... very cool :happy:
"Hard hearted beast with a jaw full of meat
Engulfed in a feast while you starve at his feet
He toss you the least little portion of a piece
To the floor and expect you to rejoice when you eat" - Brother Ali
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Postby yoshi » Oct 5th, '06, 16:25

i like it.. Clarky's right, you could record it :happy:
Maybe wrote:I'm so awesome, I don't mind looking desperate.

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Postby Sophie » Oct 5th, '06, 16:31

i like it :happy: & yeah i agree, u should record it
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Chill a nity you boon.
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Postby rhiannon » Oct 6th, '06, 12:15

:unsure: umm umm...i'll work on finishin it an then idk
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Postby AspirinE » Oct 6th, '06, 12:41

Yo yo i like it.
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Postby rhiannon » Oct 6th, '06, 20:21

ASP wrote:Yo yo i like it.
thanx!
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Postby °[~CHR!$~]° » Oct 6th, '06, 21:18

yeah nice i agree too you can record it....
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