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Postby ThomasAguanis » Oct 8th, '06, 06:15

in a chat and we did keystyles. i did 3 but kept them linked together to make 1 and here it is :8)

i start typing and spark lightning/
embark writing on adventurous journeys/
stupendous you heard me, I'm a dentist and dirty/
rentist of clergy, i'll kill priests/
thrill beasts with brill teeth/
hills steep hard to go up/
no lard will show up if you tards dont grow up/
the right card to blow up, an ace of spades/
you're face is slayed by my disgracive ways/
taste of lays on your fingers lingers/
stingers cling hers arms and legs/
harm the brave on farms with slaves/
alarm then shave, my daily routine/
you fail the extreme you're stale, im supreme/
i'll impale your regime wwith spiked verses/
i strike nurses that like hurses/
bright curses, shower the feilds/
my power jsut sheilds for hours my wheels/
towers will feel my earthquake nouns/
the birth rate clowns dont like jokes/
the right bloke will get knife poked/
alright most, people cant compare/
jsut stand and stare, are bland and bare/
ban my hair from school rules/
you drool fools, i'm cooler too/
huler blue aint even a color/
give me a reason to rub her/
oh right, its the season to love her/
im breathing above her, its missionary/
her lips are very rich and berry/
her wrists are burried on my sides/
tom just rides as the condom slides/
stay calm the tides, just slip it back/
click, it's wrapped now restart the pleasure/
our hearts are measures and the rate rises/
this date advises more to come/
so sore and numb so bubble bath time/
the scrub and laugh kind, the rub the ass time/

feedback? :laughing:
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Re: MSN keystlye

Postby Marth » Oct 8th, '06, 08:25

it's very good, nice work men :thumbsup:
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Postby ThomasAguanis » Oct 8th, '06, 17:28

Marth wrote:it's very good, nice work men :thumbsup:

thanks marth

Angie wrote::'( i missd most of it :( it was awsome though lmao :laughing: :p

wait i think you saw it all..but you were doing keystyles as i was so you probally did miss it..oh well :flower: thanks angie :8)
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Postby ThomasAguanis » Oct 8th, '06, 19:41

Clarky wrote:Haha that was ace.

I loved that first line.


thanks clarky. :8)

maybe I'll take that line or some of these and make a song..or maybe jsut record all this haha
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Postby ThomasAguanis » Oct 9th, '06, 03:32

Clarky wrote:Haha yeah record.


You do freestyles?


ok will do haha probally tomorrow..or later even but i doubt it

and i dont freestyle. i try sometinmes and may get a good line or 2 but normally i suck at it
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Postby ThomasAguanis » Oct 9th, '06, 16:50

Sarah wrote::shocked2: Damn your talented Tom, nice work! :D ;)



It got really funny towards the end :laughing:


thanks a lot Sarah :worship: :flower:
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Postby ,-,'-{Bar}-',-, » Oct 9th, '06, 19:28

great as always :D

and i heard him freestyle :laughing:

piss on yer head :shifty:
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Postby ThomasAguanis » Oct 9th, '06, 23:57

Bar wrote:great as always :D

and i heard him freestyle :laughing:

piss on yer head :shifty:


thanks bar.
:laughing: that wasnt freestyling...well kinda :laughing:
and it was "I'll piss on your face, tell you it's raining outside"...:laughing:

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I guess Ill practice sometime :)
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