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Postby Jay-19 » Oct 8th, '06, 18:01

Pickin' a ridicolous victim to throw bricks on
And pick on him till I'm just sick of the prick
He's a fag and lickin' it sick, dick is so thick
Too tricky to miss, chicks flashing their clits
Got two heads and puttin' one between your hips

Keep a piece beneath the seat so I can pop you with my feet
I'ma eat ya like a pizza when you meat me in the streets
I can be mean and light up your fleece if you freezing
Jesus! I'm so big that the mike might get greasy
I'm full of diseases to please all these Green-peacers

Just some shit... :8)
Last edited by Jay-19 on Oct 8th, '06, 20:05, edited 1 time in total.
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Postby °[~CHR!$~]° » Oct 8th, '06, 18:21

nice bro nice
propz :worship:
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Postby Marth » Oct 8th, '06, 18:22

good shit.
The world has gone crazy like eminem on kim
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Postby Jay-19 » Oct 8th, '06, 20:06

Thank you :smoking:
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Postby skitzophrenick916 » Oct 11th, '06, 01:36

haha that shit wuz raw i lyk tha last 5 lines tha most good shit
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Postby Restlesswon » Oct 11th, '06, 12:54

nice lines there man
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Postby Jay-19 » Oct 11th, '06, 18:28

Thank you restless :happy:
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