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The best shit i made for an equal diss

Postby Marth » Oct 9th, '06, 15:50

Some good shit, i Hope you like it, drop feedback pleas if you know where the quote button is

chek,.... yo...

don't mess with me
try to blast m t.v.
you're the mad one I don't like you, fuck and flee
I shoot you bitch
I dont'know or you noticed it
but i just blow you're shit

aaaight, i never try to handle you with respect
cuz left night i slep with your sister in bed
i'm like a lepracaun with a big dick
someone who says: step that one, makes me sick
I'm like a wizard in a gay club
Like admin of blizzard, who stills wanna fuck
Let's visit a very special humen
lat's watch or i'm at home, to abuse it
yeah yeah.. whot!, NO i don't got it
I'm a psychologist, with a gun
masterbaters, am i the only one?
I"ma monkey with a smoke ediction
I"m a donkey which choke at erections
Today i sleep, Tonite i'm up
I"ma selfmurderbat,in a cage, with de door shut
I was at the screentest in more former days
guys this is eddie... WHOOT, from what race?
(split) sorry i didn't ment to spit you in da face
It's for me like i'm on a turtle race
I"m the baddest football coach ever seen
"guys he picked it up with his hands.. whot keeper it don't seem"
shut up when i dance, i only step on feets
that's whot you have to do wasn't it? (NO)oh shit i didn't receive'd
I kick in everydirection
I spit in on every section
I shit on every manson
so fuck this bitch, fuck this kid cuz
(chorus)
I'm a lirical master
but with a mirical it would go faster
I'm a game desaster
but when i play, i'm a spiritual spellcaster
I blow everbody in my path
don't try to refuse me bitch, cuz i'm marth

I'm fucking hard, fucking full retard'd, flee now, or you get pharted
( phartsound) It goes fucking louded,
---------------------------- TIll here i'm done, i Need more ideas and shit to make a funny song so every Idea is welcome:P
The world has gone crazy like eminem on kim
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Postby ,-,'-{Bar}-',-, » Oct 9th, '06, 18:51

and you called my shit wack hah

pretty simple

i cant quote coz my copy and paste dont work but



most of it just confusing me

chrous is bad liek really bad man sorry , i mean

" im a lyrical master , but with a mirical it would go faster" uhm WTF :confusion:

rest of ist simple but you talk shit in some of it i seen you and you aint gonni be doing no one with a gun dont try be gangsta coz you aint

overall - practice more

id also liek to see fi you could flow it it might sound good
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Postby Marth » Oct 9th, '06, 18:54

with a mirical it would go faster
means, that when i'm rhyming like a lirical master, That with a mirical i would rhyme even more faster

and what ya mean wack? it's named: Don't mess with marth, and the flow is good
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Postby ,-,'-{Bar}-',-, » Oct 9th, '06, 18:58

Marth wrote:with a mirical it would go faster
means, that when i'm rhyming like a lirical master, That with a mirical i would rhyme even more faster

and what ya mean wack? it's named: Don't mess with marth, and the flow is good


ha so yuou saying the only way youd be able to rythm fast is with a miracle......ok :confusion:

and what you think you typing dont mess with marth intimidates me or something , and you cant just say flow is good thats for other ppl to judge
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Postby Marth » Oct 9th, '06, 19:01

wtf is your problem?
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Postby Coccoa » Oct 9th, '06, 22:29

Aint feeling it a bit. Hope it didnt take u time to write it.
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Postby Coccoa » Oct 9th, '06, 22:39

Totally :worship:

This shit can kill everyone......from laughter.
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Postby Marth » Oct 10th, '06, 14:31

IT wasn't ment to make sence, just an piece of funny shit
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Postby ,-,'-{Bar}-',-, » Oct 10th, '06, 18:57

Marth wrote:IT wasn't ment to make sence, just an piece of funny shit


dumb fuck, funnyiness still needs to make sense
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Postby Marth » Oct 10th, '06, 19:50

because your lirycs had no good rhymes you're pissed at me?? you're fake if you are so
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Postby Coccoa » Oct 10th, '06, 20:02

U had rhymes. U had no lyrics.
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Postby stevethetruth » Oct 10th, '06, 20:08

ummm ........................................ man i read it and that made no fucking sense

some advice
try making sense then worry about rhyming and other shit
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